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ponta

Oct. 10, 2020

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Beef Bowls

Beef bowls are popular food because they are inexpensive and delicious. I often eat a beef bowl when I am reluctant to cook dinner.
By the way, a strange net meme was born recently. The word is "Chi-Gyu (チー牛)". This is an abbreviation of Chizu-Gyudon which means cheese beef bowl in Japanese. Then, this word represents sluggish and childish men, so this word is used in order to self-deprecation or insulting. This is base on prejudice that nasty men often eat a beef bowl with three kinds of cheese and a soft boiled egg. I don't know why this meme has spread explosively.

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By the way, a strange net meme was born recently.

I always see this referred to as a "meme", but if you want to make it look more formal, then maybe writing it fully out as "Internet meme" would be better.

Then, this word represents sluggish and childish men, so this word is used in order tofor self-deprecation orand insulting.

This is based on prejudice that nasty men often eat a beef bowl with three kinds of cheese and a soft -boiled egg.

I don't know why this meme has spread explosivso widely.

Not wrong but I think it sounds a bit better with words like "so".

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Excellent work! Only very few grammatical errors. Thank you for the write-up and keep it up!

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ponta

Oct. 11, 2020

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Thank you, too. I will keep trying my best!

Beef Bowls


Beef bowls are popular food because they are inexpensive and delicious.


I often eat a beef bowl when I am reluctant to cook dinner.


By the way, a strange net meme was born recently.


By the way, a strange net meme was born recently.

I always see this referred to as a "meme", but if you want to make it look more formal, then maybe writing it fully out as "Internet meme" would be better.

The word is "Chi-Gyu (チー牛)".


This is an abbreviation of Chizu-Gyudon which means cheese beef bowl in Japanese.


Then, this word represents sluggish and childish men, so this word is used in order to self-deprecation or insulting.


Then, this word represents sluggish and childish men, so this word is used in order tofor self-deprecation orand insulting.

This is base on prejudice that nasty men often eat a beef bowl with three kinds of cheese and a soft boiled egg.


This is based on prejudice that nasty men often eat a beef bowl with three kinds of cheese and a soft -boiled egg.

I don't know why this meme has spread explosively.


I don't know why this meme has spread explosivso widely.

Not wrong but I think it sounds a bit better with words like "so".

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