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Become Jane Austin

Yesterday I had seen the movie named “Become Jane Austin”.
After knowing what happened to Jane and the background of that time, I felt so sorry for my challenge to the achievement and position that book, named “Pride and Prejudice”had.
In the time that Jane lived, women were not allowed to succession their father’s fortunes, the only way they would do to survive was to marry someone.
Love was luxury, Jane did not have it at the end. After considering Tom’s situation, she gave up on elopement.
How strength she is! When great regret happened to her, she rewarded the world with happiness.Under her pens, the characters all had happy endings.
It were daydreams on that time, but its popularity showed how difficult female lived at that time, and how common it happed.
In Chinese culture history,this phenomenon also existed. We sometimes can’t understand why those articles are acclaimed so much, maybe it’s just because we lack the knowledge of background.
Literature could not be desperate from history.

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Become Jane Austin

Yesterday I had seensaw the movie named “Become Jane Austin.

If the quotation is at the end of a sentence then the period goes inside the quotation marks even if it's not part of the quote.

After knowing what happened to Jane and the background of that timelearning about Jane's background and her experiences, I felt so sorry for my challenge toing the achievement and position that book, namedclaim of her book “Pride and Prejudice”had."

In the time that Jane livedJane's time, women were not allowed to successioed in their father’s fortunes, t. The only way they would do to survive was to marry someone.

Love was a luxury, that Jane dicould not have it at the end.

After considering Tom’s situation, she gave up on elopement.

HowShe was so streongth she is!

WEven when great regret happened to her, she rewarded the world with happiness. Under her pens, the characters all had happy endings.

ItHer stories were daydreams onat thate time, but its popularity showed how difficult female lived at that time, and how common it happedcommon it was for women to live with these difficulties.

In the history of Chinese culture, history,this phenomenon also existed.

We sometimes can’t understand why thosecertain articles are so acclaimed so much,, but maybe it’s just because we lack the knowledge of backgroundhistorical context.

Literature could annot be despeseparated from history.

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Let me know if you need clarification! I am able to explain in Chinese. A general comment - we tend to either use their full name "Jane Austin" or their last name "Austin" when talking about historical figures. Using just their first name gives the impression that you knew them somewhat closely/personally!

Become Jane Austin

Yesterday I had seensaw the movie named “Become Jane Austin”.

After knowing what happened to Jane and the background ofat that time, I felt so sorry for myunderstood the challenge to thes and achievement and positios described in thate book, named “Pride and Prejudice”had.

InAt the time that Jane lived, women were not allowed to successioninherit their father’s fortunes, t. The only way they wcould do to survive was to marry someone.

Love was a luxury, that Jane did not have it at the end.

After considering Tom’s situation, she gave up on elopement.decided against eloping.

How streongth she iwas!

When great regret happThough she experienced to hergreat sadness, she rewarded the world with happiness.Under her pens, In her writing / stories the characters all had happy endings.

It were dayas a dreams on at that time, but its popularity showed how difficult female lived at that time, and how common it happedit was for women to survive and how often they faced this hardship.

In Chinese cultureal history,this phenomenon also existed.

We sometimes can’t understand why those articles are acclaimed so muchheld in such high esteem, maybe it’s just because we lack the knowledge ofunderstanding of the background.

Literature cshould not be despeseparated from history.

Becomeing Jane Austin

The title of the movie is “Becoming Jane Austen,” not “become.”

Yesterday I had seensaw the movie (named) “Becomeing Jane Austin”.

“Named” isn’t necessary, but it’s also not wrong.

After knowing what happened to Jane and the background of that time, I felt so sorry for my challenge toriticism of the achievement and position that book, named “Pride and Prejudice”, had.

I assume you’re referring to your earlier post criticizing the book.

In the time that Jane lived, women were not allowed to successioninherit their father’s fortunes, t. The only waything they wcould do to survive was to marry someone.

Love was a luxury, that Jane did not have it atn the end.

After considering Tom’s situation, she gave up on elopement.

How streongth she is!

I fixed the grammar, but a more natural way of saying this would be: “She’s very strong!”

Become Jane Austin


Becomeing Jane Austin

The title of the movie is “Becoming Jane Austen,” not “become.”

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday I had seen the movie named “Become Jane Austin”.


Yesterday I had seensaw the movie (named) “Becomeing Jane Austin”.

“Named” isn’t necessary, but it’s also not wrong.

Yesterday I had seensaw the movie named “Become Jane Austin”.

Yesterday I had seensaw the movie named “Become Jane Austin.

If the quotation is at the end of a sentence then the period goes inside the quotation marks even if it's not part of the quote.

After knowing what happened to Jane and the background of that time, I felt so sorry for my challenge to the achievement and position that book, named “Pride and Prejudice”had.


After knowing what happened to Jane and the background of that time, I felt so sorry for my challenge toriticism of the achievement and position that book, named “Pride and Prejudice”, had.

I assume you’re referring to your earlier post criticizing the book.

After knowing what happened to Jane and the background ofat that time, I felt so sorry for myunderstood the challenge to thes and achievement and positios described in thate book, named “Pride and Prejudice”had.

After knowing what happened to Jane and the background of that timelearning about Jane's background and her experiences, I felt so sorry for my challenge toing the achievement and position that book, namedclaim of her book “Pride and Prejudice”had."

In the time that Jane lived, women were not allowed to succession their father’s fortunes, the only way they would do to survive was to marry someone.


In the time that Jane lived, women were not allowed to successioninherit their father’s fortunes, t. The only waything they wcould do to survive was to marry someone.

InAt the time that Jane lived, women were not allowed to successioninherit their father’s fortunes, t. The only way they wcould do to survive was to marry someone.

In the time that Jane livedJane's time, women were not allowed to successioed in their father’s fortunes, t. The only way they would do to survive was to marry someone.

Love was luxury, Jane did not have it at the end.


Love was a luxury, that Jane did not have it atn the end.

Love was a luxury, that Jane did not have it at the end.

Love was a luxury, that Jane dicould not have it at the end.

After considering Tom’s situation, she gave up on elopement.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After considering Tom’s situation, she gave up on elopement.decided against eloping.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

How strength she is!


How streongth she is!

I fixed the grammar, but a more natural way of saying this would be: “She’s very strong!”

How streongth she iwas!

HowShe was so streongth she is!

When great regret happened to her, she rewarded the world with happiness.Under her pens, the characters all had happy endings.


When great regret happThough she experienced to hergreat sadness, she rewarded the world with happiness.Under her pens, In her writing / stories the characters all had happy endings.

WEven when great regret happened to her, she rewarded the world with happiness. Under her pens, the characters all had happy endings.

It were daydreams on that time, but its popularity showed how difficult female lived at that time, and how common it happed.


It were dayas a dreams on at that time, but its popularity showed how difficult female lived at that time, and how common it happedit was for women to survive and how often they faced this hardship.

ItHer stories were daydreams onat thate time, but its popularity showed how difficult female lived at that time, and how common it happedcommon it was for women to live with these difficulties.

In Chinese culture history,this phenomenon also existed.


In Chinese cultureal history,this phenomenon also existed.

In the history of Chinese culture, history,this phenomenon also existed.

We sometimes can’t understand why those articles are acclaimed so much, maybe it’s just because we lack the knowledge of background.


We sometimes can’t understand why those articles are acclaimed so muchheld in such high esteem, maybe it’s just because we lack the knowledge ofunderstanding of the background.

We sometimes can’t understand why thosecertain articles are so acclaimed so much,, but maybe it’s just because we lack the knowledge of backgroundhistorical context.

Literature could not be desperate from history.


Literature cshould not be despeseparated from history.

Literature could annot be despeseparated from history.

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