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Nov. 23, 2022

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Be willing to try

Be willing to try
As a famous man put it, “In every triumph, there’s a lot of try.” Someone cannot be successful without time and effort, and someone is impossible to absorb the knowledge without trying to put it into practice.

Thomas Edison, one of the greatest inventor in the world, tried thousands of times to devise a lamp, which is capable of bringing light to humans during the night. Eventually, he made it, with a bunch of trying. What his story tells us is that you must initially step out your feet and try over and over again. For example, if you have stage fright, try to give speech in front of people once you seize an opportunity.

There are as many people being trapped in a circle of fear. They are the type of worrying about failure even though they even do not have a try. I reckon that it is more important than ever to try at first rather than only express your fear. If your are attempt to do something, the fear will naturally be put aside.

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Be wWilling to tTry

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

Be wWilling to tTry

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As a famous man put it, “In every triumph, there’s are a lot of tryattempts.” Someone cannot be successful without time and effort, and someoneit is impossible for someone to absorb the knowledge without trying to put it into practice.

Thomas Edison, one of the greatest inventors in the world, tried thousands of times to devise a lamp, which is capable of bringing light to humans during the night.

Eventually, he made it, with a bunch of tryingattempts.

What his story tells us is that you must initially step out of your feetego and try over and over again.

I'm not sure what you mean by "feet."

or

What his story tells us is that you must initially step out of yourself and try over and over again.

For example, if you have stage fright, try to give a speech in front of people once you seizhave an opportunity.

There are as many people beingwho are trapped in a circle of fear.

They are the type whof worrying about failure even though they even do not have aeven try.

I reckon that it is more important than ever to try at first rather than to only express your fear.

If your are attempting to do something, the fear will naturally be put aside.

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I agree! Nicely written, too!

Be willing to try


Be wWilling to tTry

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

Be willing to try


Be wWilling to tTry

I think this is a subheader but I'm not sure.

As a famous man put it, “In every triumph, there’s a lot of try.” Someone cannot be successful without time and effort, and someone is impossible to absorb the knowledge without trying to put it into practice.


As a famous man put it, “In every triumph, there’s are a lot of tryattempts.” Someone cannot be successful without time and effort, and someoneit is impossible for someone to absorb the knowledge without trying to put it into practice.

Thomas Edison, one of the greatest inventor in the world, tried thousands of times to devise a lamp, which is capable of bringing light to humans during the night.


Thomas Edison, one of the greatest inventors in the world, tried thousands of times to devise a lamp, which is capable of bringing light to humans during the night.

Eventually, he made it, with a bunch of trying.


Eventually, he made it, with a bunch of tryingattempts.

What his story tells us is that you must initially step out your feet and try over and over again.


What his story tells us is that you must initially step out of your feetego and try over and over again.

I'm not sure what you mean by "feet." or What his story tells us is that you must initially step out of yourself and try over and over again.

For example, if you have stage fright, try to give speech in front of people once you seize an opportunity.


For example, if you have stage fright, try to give a speech in front of people once you seizhave an opportunity.

There are as many people being trapped in a circle of fear.


There are as many people beingwho are trapped in a circle of fear.

They are the type of worrying about failure even though they even do not have a try.


They are the type whof worrying about failure even though they even do not have aeven try.

I reckon that it is more important than ever to try at first rather than only express your fear.


I reckon that it is more important than ever to try at first rather than to only express your fear.

If your are attempt to do something, the fear will naturally be put aside.


If your are attempting to do something, the fear will naturally be put aside.

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