Sept. 28, 2024
I want to tell a story near days. In dormitory I saw the roach. It walked with confidence at my chair. Is was not a first roach which I saw. When I saw in first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in room, but now I can gather forces, grab any book and go to kill.
Unfortunately, I could to hurt, but he run away. But yesterday he walked in a wall and this was his end.
Be Scary, But Don’t Stop
Stylistically you don’t capitalise every word
I want to tell a story near days.
In the dormitory I saw the a cockroach.
It walked with confidence atowards my chair.
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But yesterday he walked ion a wall and thisat was his end.
Be Scary, But Don’t Stop
I want to tell a story neafrom the other days.
In my dormitory I saw thea roach.
It walked with confidence aton my chair.
Ist was not athe first roach whichthat I saw.
When I saw inone the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in room, but now I can gather forces, grab any book, and go to kill it.
Unfortunately, I could to hurt it, but heit run away.
But yesterday he walked into a wall and this was his end.
Be Scary, But Don’t StopI was Scared but Took Action
Something like this?
I want to tell you a story nearabout something that happened a few days ago.
In my dormitory, I saw the a cockroach.
It walkscuttled with confidence atowards my chair.
For bugs, we don't usually say walked. We use more awful words like "scuttled".
IThis was not amy first roach which I sawtime seeing a roach in my dorm.
Something like this?
When I saw int for the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in the same room, but now I can gaI grabbed ther forces, grab any book and go toirst thing I could, which was a book, so I could kill it.
Unfortunately, I could to hurt, but hen't hit it and it ruan away.
But yesterday he walked in a, it crawled out from the wall and this was hits end.
Feedback
You can use "he/she" to describe animals
e.g. He crawled towards my chair
However, especially for bugs, it's more correct to use "it".
e.g. It crawled towards my chair
Be Scary, But Don’t Stop
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Is was not a first roach which I saw.
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