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Be Proud Of Chinese History

I like my country's history certainly.Similarly,I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.
When we talk about the Chinese history,as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years and has been proved by cultural relics.It is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.
Many interesting stories have happened in Chinese history,which are very attractive to me.I can learn how people's decisions and environment factors at that time determine the development of the thing.
When we look at the history of a country,we are also looking at the current world.
The above are the reasons for my Chinese history.Thanks for your reading.


Be Proud of Chinese History
I definitely like my country's history. Similarly, I respect and admire the history and culture of other countries.
When we talk about Chinese history, we all know that China has a history of five thousand years which has been proved with cultural relics. It is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.
Many interesting events have occured throughout in Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environmental factors at that time determined the development of civilization.
When we look at the history of a country ,we are also understanding the present world.
The above are the reasons I'm proud of Chinese history. Thanks for reading.

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Be Proud Oof Chinese History

I like my country's history certainly. Similarly,I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.

When we talk about the Chinese history, as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years and this has been proved by cultural relics.I, it is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.

Many interesting stories have happened in the Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environment factors at that time determine the development of the something.

When we look at the history of a country, we are also looking at the current world.

The above are the reasons for my Chinese history. Thanks for your reading.

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18274211076

March 24, 2023

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Thank you, It helps me a lot.

Be Proud Oof Chinese History

I like my country's history, certainly. Similarly, I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.

When we talk about the Chinese history,as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years andwhich has been proved bywith cultural relics. It is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.

Many interesting stories have happened in Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environmental factors at that time determined the development of the something.

When we look at the history of a country ,we are also looking at the current world.

The above are the reasons for mywhy I like Chinese history. Thanks for your reading.

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March 24, 2023

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Be Proud Of Chinese History

I like my country's history, certainly. Similarly, I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.

Be careful of the spacing around punctuation. This is much more important in English than in Chinese. I’ve posted about this here: https://lang-8.com/tom/journals/80634535329622716431777552819690605674

When we talk about the Chinese history,as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years and, which has been proved byn through examination of cultural relics. It is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.

Many interesting stories have happened in Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environmental factors at that time determined the development of the thingevent.

When we look at the history of a country, we are also looking at the current world.

The above are the reasons for my love of Chinese history. Thanks for your reading this.

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18274211076

March 24, 2023

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I like my country's history, certainly. Similarly, I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.

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Be Proud Of Chinese History

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Many interesting storieevents have happened inoccured throughout Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environment factors at that time determined the development of the thingcivilization.

When we look at the history of a country, we are also lookunderstanding at the current worldpresent country.

The above are the reasons for myI'm proud of Chinese history. Thanks for your reading.

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18274211076

March 24, 2023

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Ok, I get it. Thank you very much.

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Be Proud Oof Chinese History

Be Proud Oof Chinese History

I like my country's history certainly.Similarly,I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.


I definitely like my country's history certainly. Similarly, I respect and lovadmire the history and culture of other countries.

I like my country's history, certainly. Similarly, I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.

Be careful of the spacing around punctuation. This is much more important in English than in Chinese. I’ve posted about this here: https://lang-8.com/tom/journals/80634535329622716431777552819690605674

I like my country's history, certainly. Similarly, I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.

I like my country's history certainly. Similarly,I respect and love the history and culture of other countries.

When we talk about the Chinese history,as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years and has been proved by cultural relics.It is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.


When we talk about theSpeaking of Chinese history,as we all know that China has a's history dates back tof five thousand years and has beengo which was provedn by cultural relics. It is such a miracle that human civilization can be maintainedlast for such a long time.

When we talk about the Chinese history,as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years and, which has been proved byn through examination of cultural relics. It is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.

When we talk about the Chinese history,as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years andwhich has been proved bywith cultural relics. It is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.

When we talk about the Chinese history, as we all know that China has a history of five thousand years and this has been proved by cultural relics.I, it is a miracle that human civilization can be maintained for such a long time.

Many interesting stories have happened in Chinese history,which are very attractive to me.I can learn how people's decisions and environment factors at that time determine the development of the thing.


Many interesting storieevents have happened inoccured throughout Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environment factors at that time determined the development of the thingcivilization.

Many interesting stories have happened in Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environmental factors at that time determined the development of the thingevent.

Many interesting stories have happened in Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environmental factors at that time determined the development of the something.

Many interesting stories have happened in the Chinese history, which are very attractive to me. I can learn how people's decisions and environment factors at that time determine the development of the something.

When we look at the history of a country,we are also looking at the current world.


When we look at the history of a country, we are also lookunderstanding at the current worldpresent country.

When we look at the history of a country, we are also looking at the current world.

When we look at the history of a country ,we are also looking at the current world.

When we look at the history of a country, we are also looking at the current world.

The above are the reasons for my Chinese history.Thanks for your reading.


The above are the reasons for myI'm proud of Chinese history. Thanks for your reading.

The above are the reasons for my love of Chinese history. Thanks for your reading this.

The above are the reasons for mywhy I like Chinese history. Thanks for your reading.

The above are the reasons for my Chinese history. Thanks for your reading.

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