Feb. 12, 2020
Be patient and work hard
In this post i want to write about a thought or a mindhack which is summarized in one phrase
"Be patient and work hard".
We are living in a world where constantly we are under attack of the instant gratification. We are caught in a world where the feedback by (of. i don't know why use by or of) the people is the air we breathing.
Likes, notifications, comments and bells ringing. Trying to catch our attention. All those things are a time's bomb because they don't help to the people to live in the real world. In the internet world everything are running very fast and that is dangerous to us because when we try to achieve different goals in our real lives we was accustomed to have instant results. We are not prepared to work hard and be patients for achieve our goals.
Things like: loss weight, learn a language or study a career for a long five years, are things that takes time and a loooot work and they are things which are really important in the real world.
So, last sentence. "Don't be an ashol. Be patient and work hard"
En este post quiero escribir sobre un pensamiento o un hack mental que se resumido un una frase: "Se paciente y trabaja duro".
Vivimos en un mundo donde constantemente estamos bajo ataque de la gratificación instantánea. Estamos atrapados en un mundo donde la "retroalimentación" de las personas es el aire que respiramos.
Me gustas, notificaciones, comentarios y campanas sonando. Intentando atrapar nuestra atención. Todas esas cosas son una bomba de tiempo porque ellos no ayudan a las personas a vivir en un mundo real. In el mundo del internet todas las cosas están corriendo muy rápido y eso es peligroso para nosotros porque cuando intentamos conseguir diferentes objetivos en nuestras vidas reales, nos acostumbramos a tener resultados instantáneos. No estamos preparados para trabajar duro y ser pacientes para alcanzar nuestros objetivos.
Cosas como: perder peso, aprender un lenguaje, o estudiar una carrera durante cinco años, son cosas que toman tiempo y un montón de trabajo y esas son cosas que son realmente importantes en un mundo real.
A si que, última oración. "No seas un imbécil. Sé paciente y trabaja duro"
Be patient and work hard.
"Be patient and work hard".
We are living in a world where we are constantly we are under attack of confronted withe instant gratification.
To me, it sounds extremely strange to think of instant gratification attacking, especially since you don't expand on the metaphor later.
We are caught in a world where the feedback by (of. i don't know why use by or of) the people is the air we breathingwe live off of the feedback of others.
If someone is doing something, than the action is done by them. If something is from something, then it is of them. If you wanted to keep "people", then definitely drop the "the".
Likes, notifications, comments and bells ringing.
I'm going to put this sentence and the next one together, because right now the flow is pretty weird.
TLikes, notifications, comments, and ringing bells are always trying to catch our attention.
All thoese things are a time's bombs because they don't help to the people to live in the real world.
Again, rarely would you ever say, "the people", unless you're talking about the entire population, normally in a political context.
In the internet world everything areis running very fast and that, which is dangerous to us because when we try to achieve different goals in our real lives we wasare accustomed to haveing instant results.
Even though it seems wrong, everything is singular.
We are not prepared to work hard and be patients for in order to achieve our goals.
Things like: loss weight loss, learning a language or studying for a career for a long five years, are things that takes time and a loooot of work and they are things which are really important in the real world.
"Don't be an asshole. Be patient and work hard."
Feb. 12, 2020
Pretty good over all! Just looks like you might need some more practice dealing with singular vs plural verb forms. Otherwise, just some weird sentences here and there, and I'm being pretty nitpicky.
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"Don't be an asshole. Be patient and work hard."
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I'm going to put this sentence and the next one together, because right now the flow is pretty weird. |
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Trying to catch our attention.
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All those things are a time's bomb because they don't help to the people to live in the real world.
All th Again, rarely would you ever say, "the people", unless you're talking about the entire population, normally in a political context. |
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In the internet world everything are running very fast and that is dangerous to us because when we try to achieve different goals in our real lives we was accustomed to have instant results.
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