Nov. 19, 2021
November 19th, 2021
I heard the good news today that Shohei Otani won the MVP in the American League of Major League Baseball.
By the way, I watched a partial lunar eclipse this evening. Although it is a partial lunar eclipse, it is almost a total lunar eclipse because it waned 98%. I took two photos of it.
Here are the photos: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEi9juLakAQnt2K?format=jpg&name=orig
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEjMuU0aUAMlw74?format=jpg&name=orig
<p>今日は大谷翔平選手が、メジャーリーグのアメリカンリーグでMVPを獲得したという嬉しいニュースを聞きました。</p>
<p>ところで、今晩は部分月食を見ました。部分月食ですが、98％が欠けるのでほとんど皆既月食です。写真を2枚撮りました。</p>
<p>こちらが写真です。</p>
<p>https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEi9juLakAQnt2K?format=jpg&name=orig</p>
<p>https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEjMuU0aUAMlw74?format=jpg&name=orig</p>
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Today I heard the good news today that Shohei Otani won the MVP in the American League of Major League Baseball.
Today I heard the good news that Shohei Otani won the MVP in the American League of Major League Baseball.
Your original sentence works, but this feels more natural
Although it iwas a partial lunar eclipse, it iwas almost a total lunar eclipse because it wanthe shadow covered 98%.
Although it was a partial lunar eclipse, it was almost a total lunar eclipse because the shadow covered 98%.
I changed "is" to "was" because you are talking about an event that happened in the past
Your use of "wane" could be considered correct technically, but I changed it since few people would use it that way
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Very good. Beautiful photos! I wish I could have seen it. It was cloudy where I live.
Nov. 21, 2021
Thank you!
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November 19th, 2021 |
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I heard the good news today that Shohei Otani won the MVP in the American League of Major League Baseball.
Today I heard the good news Your original sentence works, but this feels more natural |
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By the way, I watched a partial lunar eclipse this evening. |
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Although it is a partial lunar eclipse, it is almost a total lunar eclipse because it waned 98%.
Although it I changed "is" to "was" because you are talking about an event that happened in the past Your use of "wane" could be considered correct technically, but I changed it since few people would use it that way |
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I took two photos of it. |
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Here are the photos: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEi9juLakAQnt2K?format=jpg&name=orig |
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https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEjMuU0aUAMlw74?format=jpg&name=orig |
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