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milkyway

Nov. 19, 2023

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BBQ

We had a BBQ in my sister’s house garden today.
It was hot in the sun, but cold in the shade.
At the first, there were desks and chairs in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grew longer, so we moved little by little to in the sun.
It was fun day.


今日は妹の家の庭でバーベキューをした。
日が当たるところは暑いくらいだったが、日陰は寒かった。
はじめは日向に机や椅子が置いてあったが、壁の影が伸びてきて少しずつ影になったので、机や椅子も少しずつ移動した。
楽しかった。

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BBQ

We had a BBQ in my sister’s house gyarden today.

It was hot in the sun, but cold in the shade.

At the first, there were deskour tables and chairs were in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grew longer, so we moved them little by little toso that we stayed in the sun.

It was a fun day.

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milkyway

Nov. 22, 2023

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Thank you.

We had a BBQ in my sister’s house[yard / garden] today.

yard - American English
garden - UK English

It was hot in the sun, but cold in the shade.

At the first, there were desk tables and chairs were in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grew longer, so we moved little by little to stay in the sun.

It was a fun day.

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milkyway

Nov. 20, 2023

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Thank you.

We had a BBQ in my sister’s house garden today.

At the first, there were deskWe started with tables and chairs in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grewot longer, so we moved little by little to inwe gradually moved to the sun.

It was a fun day.

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milkyway

Nov. 20, 2023

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Thank you.

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We had a BBQ in my sister’s house garden today.


We had a BBQ in my sister’s house[yard / garden] today.

yard - American English garden - UK English

We had a BBQ in my sister’s house garden today.

We had a BBQ in my sister’s house gyarden today.

It was hot in the sun, but cold in the shade.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the first, there were desks and chairs in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grew longer, so we moved little by little to in the sun.


At the first, there were deskWe started with tables and chairs in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grewot longer, so we moved little by little to inwe gradually moved to the sun.

At the first, there were desk tables and chairs were in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grew longer, so we moved little by little to stay in the sun.

At the first, there were deskour tables and chairs were in the sun, but as the shadow of the wall grew longer, so we moved them little by little toso that we stayed in the sun.

It was fun day.


It was a fun day.

It was a fun day.

It was a fun day.

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