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I Think I'll Post Simple Conversation

This is a conversation at a hospital reception desk.

reception : Hello.
a patient: Hi. This is Ellie. I booked with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.
reception: You're Ellie. Let me check. We have your reservation at 10 a.m. Could you show me your insurance card?
a patient: Here you are.
reception : Thank you so much. OK. Could you fill out this medical questionnaire? When you're done, please let me know.
(After filling it out)
a patient: I’ve finished filling it out. or I'm done filling it out.
reception : Thank you so much. We'll call your name when it's your turn, please wait in the waiting room.


シンプルな会話を投稿します。
今回は病院の受付での会話です。

受付: こんにちは。
患者: こんにちは。10時にリアム(Liam)先生の予約をしているエリーです。
受付: エリー様ですね。確認しますね。…10時にご予約いただいております。保険証をお願いします。
患者: どうぞ。
受付: ありがとうございます。では、こちらの問診票にご記入をお願いします。書き終わりましたら、
お声がけください。
(記入後)
患者: 記入が終わりました。
受付: ありがとうございます。順番になりましたらお呼びしますので、待合室でお待ちください。

Corrections

I Think I'll Post a Simple Conversation

This is a conversation at a hospital reception desk.

rReception

Hello. How may I help you?

They are likely to say more than just a Hello when they see you approaching.

a pPatient:

Hi.

ThisI'm Ellie. (or My name is Ellie.)

Usually you say "This is <name>" when you are on the phone.

I bookedhave an appointment with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.

Appointment is used for services while reservation is used for space such as a table at the restaurant or a hotel room.

rReception:

You'reHello Ellie.,

Let me checkJust a moment please while I check our records....

WYes, we have your reservation atappointment for 10 a.m.

Could you show mMay I please have your insurance card?

a pPatient:

Here you arego.

rReception

Thank you so much.

"So much" seems a little much for just handing over the card.

OK.

Could youPlease fill out this medical questionnaire?

When you're done, please let me knowand let me know when you're done.

(After filling it out)

a pPatient:

I’ve finished filling it 'm done, thank yout.

Your sentence is not wrong just a little wordy.

or I'm done filling it out.

rReception

Thank you so much.

We'll call your name when it's your turn, p. Please waihave a seat in the waiting room.

Feedback

Good job! I think people can already understand you clearly with your original version.
And now I know what to say when I have to visit a doctor when I am in Japan! Although I don't have an insurance card. 😅

I Think I'll Post A Simple Conversation

This is a conversation at a hospital reception desk.

rReceptionist:

"Reception" is the name of the room/area, "receptionist" is the word for the job

Hello.

a pPatient:

Not really important, but this is generally how we'd write this sort of thing

Hi.

This is Ellie.

I bookedhave an appointment with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.

"I have a booking with Dr. Liam for 10 AM" would also work, but I'm the context of a visit to the doctor "appointment" is more common

rReceptionist:

You're Ellie.Ellie, you say?

At the very least this should be a question. Otherwise it seems like the receptionist is stating who Ellie is.

Let me checkGive me a moment to check your details.

Expanding this a little bit to sound more natural in English.

We haveI've found your reservation at 10 a.m.

The original isn't really wrong, but I feel like this is a slightly more natural way of expressing it

Could you show me your insurance card?

a pPatient:

Here you are.

I saw another comment added a correction for this, but, as a British person, this sounds natural to me.

rReceptionist:

Thank you so much.

"so much" sounds like a bit much here if this is more of a formality. Just "thank you" would do.

OK.

Could you fill out this medical questionnaire?

When you're done, please let me know.

(After filling it out)

a pPatient:

I’ve finished filling it out.

or I'm done filling it out.

This isn't wrong either, both would be acceptable

rReceptionist:

Thank you so much.

We'll call your name when it's your turn, please waitake a seat in the waiting room.

The original isn't wrong grammatically, but it sounds a bit weird to tell someone to wait in the waiting room (what else would you do there?). It feels redundant, so we tend to avoid that

Feedback

Good job

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LeahLeah

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Appreciate your help with my English! 😀

I Think I'll Post A Simple Conversation

This is a conversation at a hospital reception desk.

reception :

Hello.

a patient:

Hi.

This is Ellie.

I booked an appointment or I have an appointment with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.

reception:

You're Ellie.

Let me check.

We have your reservation at 10 a.m.

Could you show me your insurance card?

a patient:

Here you areit is.

either here they are or here it is. since card is singular, im using it is.

reception :

Thank you so much.

Could you fill out this medical questionnaire?

When you're done, please let me know.

I’ve finished filling it out'm done. Here you are.

not wrong, but a bit unnatural.

or I'm done filling it out.

reception :

Thank you so much.

We'll call your name when it's your turn, please wait in the waiting room.

LeahLeah's avatar
LeahLeah

today

37

Thank you for correcting me and your comment. 😀

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reception :


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rReceptionist:

"Reception" is the name of the room/area, "receptionist" is the word for the job

rReception

Hello.


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Hello. How may I help you?

They are likely to say more than just a Hello when they see you approaching.

a patient:


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a pPatient:

Not really important, but this is generally how we'd write this sort of thing

a pPatient:

Hi.


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This is Ellie.


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ThisI'm Ellie. (or My name is Ellie.)

Usually you say "This is <name>" when you are on the phone.

I booked with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.


I booked an appointment or I have an appointment with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.

I bookedhave an appointment with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.

"I have a booking with Dr. Liam for 10 AM" would also work, but I'm the context of a visit to the doctor "appointment" is more common

I bookedhave an appointment with Dr. Liam at 10 a.m.

Appointment is used for services while reservation is used for space such as a table at the restaurant or a hotel room.

reception:


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rReceptionist:

rReception:

You're Ellie.


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You're Ellie.Ellie, you say?

At the very least this should be a question. Otherwise it seems like the receptionist is stating who Ellie is.

You'reHello Ellie.,

Let me check.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let me checkGive me a moment to check your details.

Expanding this a little bit to sound more natural in English.

Let me checkJust a moment please while I check our records....

We have your reservation at 10 a.m.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We haveI've found your reservation at 10 a.m.

The original isn't really wrong, but I feel like this is a slightly more natural way of expressing it

WYes, we have your reservation atappointment for 10 a.m.

Could you show me your insurance card?


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Could you show mMay I please have your insurance card?

a patient:


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a pPatient:

a pPatient:

Here you are.


Here you areit is.

either here they are or here it is. since card is singular, im using it is.

Here you are.

I saw another comment added a correction for this, but, as a British person, this sounds natural to me.

Here you arego.

reception :


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rReceptionist:

rReception

Thank you so much.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you so much.

"so much" sounds like a bit much here if this is more of a formality. Just "thank you" would do.

Thank you so much.

"So much" seems a little much for just handing over the card.

OK.


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OK.

Could you fill out this medical questionnaire?


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Could youPlease fill out this medical questionnaire?

When you're done, please let me know.


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When you're done, please let me knowand let me know when you're done.

(After filling it out)


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a patient:


a pPatient:

a pPatient:

I’ve finished filling it out.


I’ve finished filling it out'm done. Here you are.

not wrong, but a bit unnatural.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’ve finished filling it 'm done, thank yout.

Your sentence is not wrong just a little wordy.

or I'm done filling it out.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

or I'm done filling it out.

This isn't wrong either, both would be acceptable

or I'm done filling it out.

reception :


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rReceptionist:

rReception

Thank you so much.


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Thank you so much.

Thank you so much.

We'll call your name when it's your turn, please wait in the waiting room.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We'll call your name when it's your turn, please waitake a seat in the waiting room.

The original isn't wrong grammatically, but it sounds a bit weird to tell someone to wait in the waiting room (what else would you do there?). It feels redundant, so we tend to avoid that

We'll call your name when it's your turn, p. Please waihave a seat in the waiting room.

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