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I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, today good things happened. Although I still didn’t get any direct interview chances, hrs talked to me several times. I’m satisfied.

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I’m satisfied.

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I’m satisfied.

I’m satisfied.

I’m satisfied.

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Although I still didn’t get any direct interview chances, hrs talked to me several times.

I’m satisfied.

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I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, today good things happened.


I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, today good things happened today. I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, good things happened today.

I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, todaysome good things happened today. I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, some good things happened today.

I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, today good things happened today. I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, good things happened today.

I’m still trying to find a summer internship and l. Luckily, today good things happened today. I’m still trying to find a summer internship. Luckily, good things happened today.

I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily, today, good things happened. I’m still trying to find a summer internship and luckily today, good things happened.

Although I still didn’t get any direct interview chances, hrs talked to me several times.


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Although I still didn’t get any directchances to interview chances, hrs talked to(directly?), HR departments contacted me several times. Although I still didn’t get any chances to interview (directly?), HR departments contacted me several times.

I would replace "directly" with "in person" or omit it, depending on what you mean. If you only mean HR from one company, just write "HR."

Although I still didn’t get the chance to do any direct interview chs, HR from a few different compancies, hrsave talked to me several times. Although I still didn’t get the chance to do any direct interviews, HR from a few different companies have talked to me several times.

"Although I still didn’t get the chance to do any direct interviews, HR from a few different companies have talked to me several times." "direct interview chances" isn't explicitly wrong, but it isn't how a native speaker would phrase it. I corrected it to something that sounds a little more natural. I'm assuming HR here means Human Resources, aka the department in a company that is involved in hiring new interns. HR is not referred to as a plural, even when talking about departments from several different companies/organizations, which is what makes this translation a little bit tricky. HR is a pretty difficult noun since it doesn't follow normal rules lol.

Although I still didn’t get any direct interview chances, hrsHR talked to me several times. Although I still didn’t get any direct interview chances, HR talked to me several times.

Although I still didn’t get any direct interview chances, hrs talked to me severI was able to talk timeo multiple HRs. Although I still didn’t get any direct interview chances, I was able to talk to multiple HRs.

I’m satisfied.


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