June 8, 2022
Baseball is a game of failure
I lived in Japan for one solid year.
But I still don’t know much about baseball.
Actually, I also lived in UK for 7 years too.
But I never become a football fans.
That is my problem!
Anyway, this phase “baseball is a game of failure” is compelling.
I love snooker, every day I dream to become a professional snooker player.
But I just don’t have the quality not even close to a good player.
Baseball, snooker furthermore our life is “game of failure” too.
If you can overcome against all odds.
You are a true winner, I am not!
Baseball is a game of failure
I lived in Japan for one solidwhole year.
But I still don’t know much about baseball.
Actually, I also lived in the UK for 7 years too.
But I never becoame a football fans.
That is my problem!
Anyway, this phase “baseball is a game of failure” is compelling.
I love snooker, every day I dream abouto becomeing a professional snooker player.
But I just don’t have the quality not even close toskills and abilities of a good player.
Baseball, snooker furthermoreand our life is “game of failure” too.
If you can overcome it against all odds.
You are a true winner, unfortunately I am not!
Baseball is a game of failure
I lived in Japan for one solid year.
But I still don’t know much about baseball.
Actually, I also lived in the UK for 7 years too.
"The" comes before UK, such as: in the UK, to the UK, from the UK, etc.
But I never becoame a football fans.
That is my problem!
Anyway, this phrase “baseball is a game of failure” is compelling.
I love snooker, and every day I dream tof becomeing a professional snooker player.
You can either use "and" as in the correction, or you can write two separate sentences: "I love snooker. Every day I dream of becoming a professional snooker player."
But I just don’t have the quality not even close toeven come close to having the quality of a good player.
Baseball, snooker, and furthermore our life is “game of failure” too.
If you can overcome against all oddsll odds, you are a true winner.
"If you can overcome all odds" isn't a complete sentence, so you should use a comma to join the phrase to "you are a true winner". "Against" is not needed.
You are a true winner, I am not!
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I lived in Japan for one solid year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I lived in Japan for one |
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Actually, I also lived in UK for 7 years too. Actually, I also lived in the UK for 7 years too. "The" comes before UK, such as: in the UK, to the UK, from the UK, etc. Actually, I also lived in the UK for 7 years |
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I love snooker, every day I dream to become a professional snooker player. I love snooker, and every day I dream You can either use "and" as in the correction, or you can write two separate sentences: "I love snooker. Every day I dream of becoming a professional snooker player." I love snooker, every day I dream about |
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But I just don’t have the quality not even close to a good player. But I just don’t But I just don’t have the |
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Baseball, snooker furthermore our life is “game of failure” too. Baseball, snooker, and furthermore our life is “game of failure” too. Baseball, snooker |
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If you can overcome against all odds. If you can overcome a "If you can overcome all odds" isn't a complete sentence, so you should use a comma to join the phrase to "you are a true winner". "Against" is not needed. If you can overcome it against all odds. |
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You are a true winner, I am not!
You are a true winner, unfortunately I am not! |
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