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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 19, 2021

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The start of the high school baseball game was delayed due to the rain today. It has already been postponed for six days due to the rain. The games are held at the koshien stadium. The koshien stadium is the home field of a professional baseball team called Hanshin. The stadium will be used for the professional baseball games soon, so I'm worried if it will finish in time.


今日、雨のため高校野球の開始が遅れました。雨のため、既に6日も順延になっています。試合は甲子園球場で行われています。甲子園球場はプロ野球チーム、阪神の本拠地です。甲子園はもうすぐプロ野球で使われるので、高校野球が期間内に終わるかどうか心配です。

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Baseball

The start of the high school baseball gameseason was delayed due to the rain today.

It hasd already been postponed for six days due to the rain.

The games are held at the kKoshien sStadium.

Unless there are multiple "Koshien Stadium"s, you can omit "the".

The kKoshien sStadium is the home field of athe professional baseball team called, Hanshin.

The stadium will be used for the professional baseball games soon, so I'm worried if it willthe high school games won't finish in time.

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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 19, 2021

4

Thank you!

Baseball

The start of the high school baseball game was delayed due to the rain today.

It hasd already been postponed for six days due to the rain.

This postponement happened before today's postponement, so we use "had" instead of "has".

The games are held at the kKoshien sStadium.

It's not so important but proper nouns need to be capitalised - names of stadiums, cities, countries, people, organisations, etc. Just in case you didn't know :)

The kKoshien sStadium is the home field of a professional baseball team called Hanshin.

Hanshin Tigers!

The stadium will be used for the professional baseball games soon, so I'm worried if it willthe high school game won't finish in time.

"the high school game" needs to be added to make the statement a little clearer

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Well done! I hope the game can be played soon! But since it's raining so much, won't the professional games also need to be postponed?

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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 19, 2021

4

Thank you!

Baseball


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The start of the high school baseball game was delayed due to the rain today.


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The start of the high school baseball gameseason was delayed due to the rain today.

It has already been postponed for six days due to the rain.


It hasd already been postponed for six days due to the rain.

This postponement happened before today's postponement, so we use "had" instead of "has".

It hasd already been postponed for six days due to the rain.

The games are held at the koshien stadium.


The games are held at the kKoshien sStadium.

It's not so important but proper nouns need to be capitalised - names of stadiums, cities, countries, people, organisations, etc. Just in case you didn't know :)

The games are held at the kKoshien sStadium.

Unless there are multiple "Koshien Stadium"s, you can omit "the".

The koshien stadium is the home field of a professional baseball team called Hanshin.


The kKoshien sStadium is the home field of a professional baseball team called Hanshin.

Hanshin Tigers!

The kKoshien sStadium is the home field of athe professional baseball team called, Hanshin.

The stadium will be used for the professional baseball games soon, so I'm worried if it will finish in time.


The stadium will be used for the professional baseball games soon, so I'm worried if it willthe high school game won't finish in time.

"the high school game" needs to be added to make the statement a little clearer

The stadium will be used for the professional baseball games soon, so I'm worried if it willthe high school games won't finish in time.

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