Nov. 29, 2020
Baseball
Baseball is one of the most popular sports in the U.S. Most of American children plays baseball in fields in the neighborhoods. They learn how to get along with others through hard work, talking about who plays better or worse than them. At the same time, they experience a sense of humiliation in being beaten by others, and learn how to cope with it.
Baseball is one of the most popular sports in the U.S. Most of American children plays baseball in fields in their neighborhoods.
Most Americans don't play baseball anymore :( it was more common in the past
They learn how to get along with others through hard work, talking about who plays better or worse than them.
At the same time, they experience a sense of humiliationty in being beaten by others, and learn how to cope with it.
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humiliation means to be extremely embarrassed. Humility is realizing you are not the greatest.
Baseball
Baseball is one of the most popular sports in the U.S. Most of American children plays baseball in fields in the neighborhood fields.
“Neighborhood fields” is more idiomatic.
They learn how to get along with others through hard work, talking about who plays better or worse than themy do.
The second half doesn’t logically connect to the first half. I would make the connection with “get along with others” more obvious, for example with “discussing each other’s strengths when creating a team.”
At the same time, they experience a sense of humiliation in beingwhen they are beaten by others, and they learn how to cope with it.
This sounds better.
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