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During the National Day holiday, my family and I traveled to Hui Zhou(惠州). In a local restaurant, we tasted the bamboo leaves tea for the first time. We were amazed by its fresh smell and long-lasting taste. Normally, green tea taste a bit bitter, but the bamboo leaves tea is not bitter at all. I've never known that bamboo leaves can be made to tea. It's made of the new baby leaves of bamboos, must cost a lot of labor to pick them up, so the price is quite expensive. It's a specialty of Hui Zhou, not easy to buy in other places, so we bought a big sack of tea leaves before going back home. Sometimes even just smelling the dry tea leaves is satisfying enough. The fresh smell makes me feel like I'm in a bamboo forest. If you don't like the bitter taste of green tea, maybe you can try bamboo leaves tea.
Bamboo Leavesf Tea
We tend to use the singular form in the names of food and drink (eg: banana smoothie, apple juice)
During the National Day holiday, my family and I traveled to Hui Zhou(惠州).
In a local restaurant, we tasted the bamboo leavesf tea for the first time.
No need for "the" here, feels most natural without it
We were amazed by its fresh smell and long-lasting taste.
Normally, green teas taste a bit bitter, but the bamboo leavesf tea iwas not bitter at all.
Since you're talking about multiple types of green tea it should be plural
Since you're discussing the specific bamboo leaf tea that you drank it makes sense to talk in the past tense here
I've never known that bamboo leaves can be made into tea.
"made to" feels unnatural here. The more natural phrase for describing the processing of something into something else is "made into".
"made to" is used in certain contexts:
"I was made to walk home in the rain" - I didn't want to walk home in the rain, but someone or something made me do it
"made to order" - each item is created when the order is received, usually implying a high degree of customisability
"the machine was made to turn parts into cars" - describes the purpose of the machine, it was created for the purpose of turning car parts into cars
It's made of the new baby leaves of bamboos, which must costtake a lot of labor to pick them up, so ithe price is quite expensive.
This sentence felt a little unnatural so reworded to make it read more smoothly. "which" serves to link the part about requiring labor to the baby bamboo leaves
When talking about how much labor something takes we tend to use the words "takes" or "requires". "costs" isn't strictly wrong and people will understand your meaning, but it's slightly less natural wording
"the price is quite expensive" also feels a little unnatural. We would tend to either describe the price as "high" or "steep", or describe the item itself as "expensive"
It's a specialty of Hui Zhou, which is not easy to buy in other places, so we bought a big sack of tea leaves before going back home.
Again this sentence needed something to link the part about not being easy to buy to the tea
Sometimes even just smelling the dry tea leaves is satisfying enough.
The fresh smell makes me feel like I'm in a bamboo forest.
If you don't like the bitter taste of green tea, maybe you can try bamboo leavesf tea.
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Very good! I know I wrote a lot in the corrections but that's because a lot of the corrections were quite technical things that would take the writing up a notch. Your writing was very easy to follow and understand!
I don't drink much tea, but bamboo leaf tea sounds interesting so I would give it a go if I had the chance
Bamboo Leavesf Tea
Leaf sounds more natural here because the bamboo is processed to make the tea.
During the holiday for National Day holiday, my family and I traveled to Hui Zhou(惠州).
In a local restaurant, we tasted the bamboo leavesf tea for the first time.
Same reason as the title.
We were amazed by its fresh smell and long-lasting taste.
Normally, green tea tastes a bit bitter, but the bamboo leavesf tea iwas not bitter at all.
Since you are referring to the bamboo leaf tea in the context of a past experience I you should use "was".
I've never knownew that bamboo leaves can be made to tea.
Saying "I've never" sort of implies that this is still the case, rather than that you recently learned that this isn't true.
It's made of the new baby leaves of bamboos, must costIt needs a lot of labor to pick them up, so the price is quite expensive.
Here you could either say "It's very expensive to pick them" or what I wrote above. What you wrote sort of combines the two so it feels a bit confusing.
It's a specialty of Hui Zhou, so it's not easy to buy in other places, sothus, we bought a big sack of tea leaves before going back home.
There needs to be a connective word between "It's a specialty of Hui Zhou" and "not easy to buy in other places". I switched where "so" was only because it sounded better but where you had it wasn't wrong.
Sometimes even just smelling the dry tea leaves is satisfying enough.
The fresh smell makes me feel like I'm in a bamboo forest.
If you don't like the bitter taste of green tea, maybe you can try bamboo leavesf tea.
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Thanks for sharing! As a fellow tea lover I will take your advice and try it in the future.
During the National Day holiday, my family and I traveled to Hui Zhou(惠州).
In a local restaurant, we tasted the bamboo leavesf tea for the first time.
We were amazed by its fresh smell and long-lasting taste.
Normally, green tea taste a bis somewhat bitter, but the bamboo leavesf tea is not bitter at all.
"A bit bitter" is grammatically fine, but for style I suggest avoiding the repeated "bit bit(ter)" sound.
I've had never known that bamboo leaves can be made into tea.
It's made ofrom the new baby leaves of bamboos, and must costtake a lot of labor to pick them up, so the price is quite expensive.
It's a specialty of Hui Zhou, not easy to buy in other places, so we bought a big sack of tea leaves before going back home.
Sometimes even just smelling the dry tea leaves is satisfying enough.
The fresh smell makes me feel like I'm in a bamboo forest.
If you don't like the bitter taste of green tea, maybe you can try bamboo leavesf tea.
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Normally, green tea taste a bit bitter, but the bamboo leaves tea is not bitter at all. Normally, green tea taste "A bit bitter" is grammatically fine, but for style I suggest avoiding the repeated "bit bit(ter)" sound. Normally, green tea tastes a bit bitter, but the bamboo lea Since you are referring to the bamboo leaf tea in the context of a past experience I you should use "was". Normally, green teas taste a bit bitter, but the bamboo lea Since you're talking about multiple types of green tea it should be plural Since you're discussing the specific bamboo leaf tea that you drank it makes sense to talk in the past tense here |
I've never known that bamboo leaves can be made to tea. I I Saying "I've never" sort of implies that this is still the case, rather than that you recently learned that this isn't true. I've never known that bamboo leaves can be made into tea. "made to" feels unnatural here. The more natural phrase for describing the processing of something into something else is "made into". "made to" is used in certain contexts: "I was made to walk home in the rain" - I didn't want to walk home in the rain, but someone or something made me do it "made to order" - each item is created when the order is received, usually implying a high degree of customisability "the machine was made to turn parts into cars" - describes the purpose of the machine, it was created for the purpose of turning car parts into cars |
It's made of the new baby leaves of bamboos, must cost a lot of labor to pick them up, so the price is quite expensive. It's made It's made of the Here you could either say "It's very expensive to pick them" or what I wrote above. What you wrote sort of combines the two so it feels a bit confusing. It's made of the new baby leaves of bamboo This sentence felt a little unnatural so reworded to make it read more smoothly. "which" serves to link the part about requiring labor to the baby bamboo leaves When talking about how much labor something takes we tend to use the words "takes" or "requires". "costs" isn't strictly wrong and people will understand your meaning, but it's slightly less natural wording "the price is quite expensive" also feels a little unnatural. We would tend to either describe the price as "high" or "steep", or describe the item itself as "expensive" |
It's a specialty of Hui Zhou, not easy to buy in other places, so we bought a big sack of tea leaves before going back home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It's a specialty of Hui Zhou, so it's not easy to buy in other places, There needs to be a connective word between "It's a specialty of Hui Zhou" and "not easy to buy in other places". I switched where "so" was only because it sounded better but where you had it wasn't wrong. It's a specialty of Hui Zhou Again this sentence needed something to link the part about not being easy to buy to the tea |
Sometimes even just smelling the dry tea leaves is satisfying enough. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The fresh smell makes me feel like I'm in a bamboo forests. |
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Bamboo Leaves Tea Bamboo Lea Leaf sounds more natural here because the bamboo is processed to make the tea. Bamboo Lea We tend to use the singular form in the names of food and drink (eg: banana smoothie, apple juice) |
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