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johnnymnemonic

Aug. 24, 2025

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Ballroom dance

I do ballroom dancing for 5-6 hour at week. During my childhood dream, but my mother did not support me. Recently I tried dancing with a trainer at a sports-club. And... It turned out that I'm talented in it. I feel pleasure when I'm dancing. In my life substantially increased feelings of pleasure. I'm currently learning the rumba. I love it!

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I do ballroom dancing for 5-6 hour atfive to six hours per week.

During my childhood dream, but my mother did not support meMy mother did not support my childhood dream (of dancing).

Recently, I tried dancing with a trainer at a sports- club.

And...

It turned out that I'm talented in ithat.

I feel pleasure when I'm dancing.

In my life substan, dancing drastically increaseds feelings of pleasure.

I'm currently learning the rumba.

I love it!

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marblemenow

Aug. 24, 2025

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Nice job!

OPTION A: I do ballroom dancing for5-6 hours a week.¶
OPTION B: I practice ballroom dancing
5-6 hours at week.

During myOPTION A: Doing this was a childhood dream, but my mother did not support mefrowned on it.¶
OPTION B: I have been fascinated by ballroom dancing since childhood, but my mother disapproved
.

Recently I tried dancing with a trainer at a sports-club.

And...[SEE BELOW]

It turned out that I'm talented in it.OPTION A: And it seems that I'm talented in it.¶
OPTION B: Moreover, it seems that I'm skilled at it.

I feel pleasure when I'm dancingMORE VIVIDLY: Dancing is a joy.¶
ALSO POSSIBLE: Dancing is a pleasure
.

In my life substantially increasedMY GUESS: Moreover, my overall feelings of pleasurewellness has increased.

I'm currently learning the rumba.

I love it!

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Glad you are enjoying dancing!

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And...[SEE BELOW]

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Ballroom dance


Ballroom dDanceing

I do ballroom dancing for 5-6 hour at week.


OPTION A: I do ballroom dancing for5-6 hours a week.¶
OPTION B: I practice ballroom dancing
5-6 hours at week.

I do ballroom dancing for 5-6 hour atfive to six hours per week.

During my childhood dream, but my mother did not support me.


During myOPTION A: Doing this was a childhood dream, but my mother did not support mefrowned on it.¶
OPTION B: I have been fascinated by ballroom dancing since childhood, but my mother disapproved
.

During my childhood dream, but my mother did not support meMy mother did not support my childhood dream (of dancing).

Recently I tried dancing with a trainer at a sports-club.


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Recently, I tried dancing with a trainer at a sports- club.

It turned out that I'm talented in it.


It turned out that I'm talented in it.OPTION A: And it seems that I'm talented in it.¶
OPTION B: Moreover, it seems that I'm skilled at it.

It turned out that I'm talented in ithat.

I feel pleasure when I'm dancing.


I feel pleasure when I'm dancingMORE VIVIDLY: Dancing is a joy.¶
ALSO POSSIBLE: Dancing is a pleasure
.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my life substantially increased feelings of pleasure.


In my life substantially increasedMY GUESS: Moreover, my overall feelings of pleasurewellness has increased.

In my life substan, dancing drastically increaseds feelings of pleasure.

I'm currently learning the rumba.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love it!


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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