Aug. 17, 2024
Bagel
Hello, first time here!
Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.
I've never thought bagels were good before.
But I have only eaten a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.
I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.
If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.
Let those who like it enjoy it!
🥯
Bagel
Hello, first time here!
Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.
I've never thought bagels were good before.
But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.
I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.
If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.
Let those who like it enjoy it!
🥯
Bagels
ALSO POSSIBLE: About bagels
Bagels usually look really fancy in most bakeries.
SUGGESTION: Hedge the sentence with words such as "usually" or "most" since exceptions do exist. / 提案：例外は存在するので、「通常 」や 「ほとんどの場合 」といった言葉で文章をくくる。 / 建议：用 “通常 ”或 “大多数 ”等词对句子进行对冲，因为例外情况确实存在。
I've never thought bagels were good before.
But I have only eaten a few times, maybe IHowever, perhaps I haven't tried enough of them.
I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.
If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probablyI still do not like bagels in this way, then perhaps I just don't like bagels.
Let those who like it enjoy it!
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IDEA: You might like blueberry bagels with peanut butter or cranberry bagels with bananas.
Aug. 18, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and bagel suggestions. I like how you make the sentences more logical. "Hedge the sentence" makes me feel like setting an abstract conditional scope. “hedge”在这里应该不是“对冲”，也许是“包围”。
Bagels
Plural is more natural unless you’re writing about a specific bagel.
Hello, first time here!
Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.
I've never thought bagels were good before.
“Before” would imply that something has changed since the time “before,” like you’ve changed your mind.
But I have only eaten them a few times, so maybe I haven't tried enough.
You could merge this with the previous sentence:
I've never thought bagels were good, but I have only eaten them a few times, so maybe I haven't tried enough.
I think I should choose a good bakery, and try (to eat) them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.
It would sound more natural without “to eat.”
If after all the trying I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.
Let those who like ithem enjoy ithem!
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Welcome to LangCorrect!
Do you like any other kinds of bread?
In the US, there are basically two kinds of bagels: the kind that are boiled in water before baking, and the kind that are baked without any boiling. The former tend to be harder & chewier than the latter, and the latter tend to taste pretty much like regular bread. I prefer the former. But I like 饅頭 even better. :-)
Aug. 18, 2024
Thank you for your corrections. I want to use English more naturally. I like English muffins, baguette and pizza.
I didn't know it could be boiled in water! It feels like a lot of experimentation with bread. So maybe you prefer a chewier texture.
Ha! It feels a bit strange for me to call 饅頭 bread.
Aug. 18, 2024
> It feels a bit strange for me
> to call 饅頭 bread.
I know what you mean, because we usually think of 饅頭 and 麵包 as two different things, and 麵包 is usually translated as “bread,” but in English, bread is a very broad category of foods. 饅頭 is in the “steamed bread” category. :-)
> So maybe you prefer a
> chewier texture.
Yes, I suppose I do. :-)
Bagel
Hello, first time here!
Bagels look really fancy in bakeries.
I've never thought bagels were good before.
But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.
I think I should choose a good bakery, and try to eat them with something else, like cream cheese, instead of just on their own.
If after all the tryingis, I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.
Let those who like ithem enjoy it!
🥯
Aug. 18, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
But I have only eaten them a few times, maybe I haven't tried enough.
You have to add the "them" here, or else it sounds like you have only eaten a few time in your whole life :)
If after all the tryingtrying them like this I still feel the same, then I guess I probably just don't like bagels.
I'm not sure exactly what you mean by "all the trying", but it's not grammatically correct. I tried to suggest something that sounds natural to me
Let those who like ithem enjoy ithem!
Bagels are plural so it needs to be "them" instead of "it".
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This was an entertaining and solid essay! Well done!!
Aug. 18, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and encouragement.
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