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Tammy

Oct. 17, 2024

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Badminton

I signed up for a badminton activity, which will be held tonight.

I'm a little excited and anxious because I haven't played badminton for nearly three years.

I began playing this game regularly after learning it benefits my neck health. And indeed, it helped me a lot.


我报名参加了一个今晚举行的羽毛球活动。

我有点兴奋,又有点焦虑,因为我已经近三年没有打过羽毛球了。

了解到它有利于颈部健康之后,我开始经常打。确实对我帮助很大。

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And indeed, it has helped me a lot.

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Tammy

Nov. 4, 2024

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Got it, thanks a lot!

I signed up for a game of badminton activity, which will be held tonight.

In English, we don't usually say "sport name + activity." The best way to say it is, "a game of + sport name."

I'm a little excited and anxious because I haven't played badminton for nearly three years.

I began playing thise sport/the game/it regularly after learning that it benefits my neck health.

Nothing completely wrong with what you wrote. But, my sense as a native speaker leads me to believe that using "the sport," "the game," "it" is more natural. Secondly, adding a "that" in between "learning" and "it" makes it flow better. It was perfectly fine as your wrote it though, these are just considerations.

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Tammy

Oct. 21, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

I signed up for a badminton activitygame, which will be held tonight.

I'm a little excited and anxious because I haven't played badminton for nearly three years.

I began playing this game regularly after learning it benefitsthat it is beneficial for my neck health.

And indeed, it helped me a lot.

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Tammy

Oct. 21, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

And indeed, it helped me a lot.


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And indeed, it has helped me a lot.

Badminton


I signed up for a badminton activity, which will be held tonight.


I signed up for a badminton activitygame, which will be held tonight.

I signed up for a game of badminton activity, which will be held tonight.

In English, we don't usually say "sport name + activity." The best way to say it is, "a game of + sport name."

I'm a little excited and anxious because I haven't played badminton for nearly three years.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I began playing this game regularly after learning it benefits my neck health.


I began playing this game regularly after learning it benefitsthat it is beneficial for my neck health.

I began playing thise sport/the game/it regularly after learning that it benefits my neck health.

Nothing completely wrong with what you wrote. But, my sense as a native speaker leads me to believe that using "the sport," "the game," "it" is more natural. Secondly, adding a "that" in between "learning" and "it" makes it flow better. It was perfectly fine as your wrote it though, these are just considerations.

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