Dec. 29, 2022
Bad Thing
December 29, 2022
Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated it for so long ?
I was infected with Covid 19. On that day. My throat was very dry. It was a very bad things. At night. I can't sleep in bed. I was dying of pain. I woke up many times during the night.
A Bad Thing
December 29, 2022
Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated itwritten an entry here for so long ?
I was infectedsick with Covid 19./I caught Covid 19.
What you wrote is ok, but I think these are better options.
On that day.
Mmy throat was very dry.
It was a very bad things.situation at night.
At night.
I caouldn't sleep in bed.
I was dying of pain.
I woke up many times during the night.
Dec. 31, 2022
Thank you！
A Bad Thing
This sounds more natural in the US for a title.
December 29, 2022
Long time, no see, d. Do you know why I haven't updated itposted for so long ?
I was infected with Covid 19.
On that day, my throat was very dry.
This is a sentence fragment so I add the next line to it.
My throat was very dry.
It was a very bad things.
At night I couldn't sleep.
This is another sentence fragment. "can" is present tense while "could" is past tense.
I can't sleep in bed.
I was dying of pain.
I woke up many times during the night.
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I'm sorry to hear this. I'm glad you're feeling better. Good work.
Dec. 31, 2022
Thank you for your concern. I'm all right now
Long time no see, do you know why I haven't updated it forin so long ?
I was infected with Covid OVID-19.
if you want to be more casual, you could say "i got covid" or "i caught covid". in casual coversation, it's rare to hear someone say "i was infected with".
It was a very bad things.
I was dying of painin so much pain I felt I could die.
Dec. 31, 2022
Thank you
Bad Thing
December 29, 2022
Long time no see, d. Do you know why I haven't updated it forposted an update here in so long ?
I was infected with Covid 19.
On that day, my throat was very dry (very sore?).
It was a very bad things.
At night., I couldn’t sleep in my bed.
I was dying of pain.
I woke up many times during the night.
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I hope you’re feeling better now.
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