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roy

Nov. 8, 2022

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Bad day

My son is sad, yesterday his dog died. Son's dog was funny and friendly. Both of them played every day. Now my son feels alone. I would like that he will be Happy and smile.

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My son is sad, because yesterday his dog died.

"My son is sad" and "yesterday his dog died" are two clauses. You can connect them by using "because". This sounds more natural.

SMy son's dog was funny and friendly.

You can also say "his dog", or "that dog".

Both of them played every day.

Now my son feels alone.

I would like that he willant him to be Hhappy and smile.

There are many ways to say this. "I wish he would be happy and smile", "I hope that he will be happy and smile", etc.

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My condolences regarding your son's dog.

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roy

Nov. 14, 2022

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Thank

Son'His dog was funny and friendly.

Or: "My son's dog was funny and friendly"

I would likeish that he willould be Hhappy and smile.

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so sorry for him :,(

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roy

Nov. 9, 2022

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Thanks for your correction

Bad day


My son is sad, yesterday his dog died.


My son is sad, because yesterday his dog died.

"My son is sad" and "yesterday his dog died" are two clauses. You can connect them by using "because". This sounds more natural.

Son's dog was funny and friendly.


Son'His dog was funny and friendly.

Or: "My son's dog was funny and friendly"

SMy son's dog was funny and friendly.

You can also say "his dog", or "that dog".

Both of them played every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now my son feels alone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would like that he will be Happy and smile.


I would likeish that he willould be Hhappy and smile.

I would like that he willant him to be Hhappy and smile.

There are many ways to say this. "I wish he would be happy and smile", "I hope that he will be happy and smile", etc.

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