March 3, 2023
Back to childhood
My mother is going to visit me this Friday.
It’s kind of wired for me to say “my mom will ‘visit’ me”. She lives in our hometwon which is a small countryside. I work at the capital of the Province. Although we almost chat online everyday, I hardly meet her in reality except the holidays and festivals after I graduated.
Time goes by, I grow into an adult, my mom back to her childhood. I care about my mom like a mother cares about her daughter. Actually, it is that she acts like a child.
In our hometown, there is a little of infrastructure like bus and subway. My mother seldom travels far. She only went to Beijing once at her thirty with my cousion and me. It was a celebration for me because I went to my grade 7 from primary school. Her another trip was going to Shanghai. Of course, it’s because of me again. I got my college degree at there. Before I left Shanghai, I invited my parents to have a travel in Shanghai.
I said a lot for proving that she was lack of the experiences of living in morden city. She cannot order the train ticket or the hotel through the smart phone APPs . She never take the subway alone. Like a child. That’s the reason I worry about her.
I have to go to work at Friday which means my mom should take the subway from the train station to my house alone. She said it’s OK but I still get nervous. It seems that she is a little girl who exicted to go to school by herself, I am the anxious mother.
Was she worry about me when I am a little girl plan to go to school by myself?lol.
Hope everthing is fine.
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It was a celebration for me because I went to my grade 7 from primary school.
Her another trip was going to Shanghai.
I got my college degree at there.
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She cannot order thea train ticket or thebook a hotel room through the smart phone APPapps .
She never takes the subway alone.
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Hopefully everthing is fine.
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Great job! Overall totally intelligible, just a few awkward sounding sentences.
March 16, 2023
I said a lot for proving that she was lack of the experiences of living in mordern city.
Not exactly sure what your meaning is here
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Nice job on your entry. I hope that her visit goes well, too!
March 3, 2023
Thanks for your modification and wishes!
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