It’s kind of wired for me to say, “my mom will ‘visit’ me”. It’s kind of wired for me to say, “my mom will ‘visit’ me”.

It’s kind of weired for me to say “my mom will ‘visit’ me”. It’s kind of weird for me to say “my mom will ‘visit’ me”.

ShWe lives in our hometwon which isthe same town that's on a small countryside. We live in the same town that's on a small countryside.

She lives in our hometwown which is a small and in the countryside. She lives in our hometown which is small and in the countryside.

I work atin the capital of the Pprovince. I work in the capital of the province.

Although we almost chat online everyday, I've hardly mseetn her in realityperson since I graduated except theon holidays and festivals after I graduated. Although we almost chat online everyday, I've hardly seen her in person since I graduated except on holidays.

Although we almost chat online almost everyday, I hardly meet her in realityperson except thefor holidays and festivals after Isince my graduatedion. Although we chat online almost everyday, I hardly meet her in person except for holidays and festivals since my graduation.

"after I graduated" sounds a bit awkward since the rest of the sentence is present tense.

Time goesAs time went by, I groew into an adult, and my mom back toecame more like she was during her childhood. As time went by, I grew into an adult, and my mom became more like she was during her childhood.

TAs time goes by, I grow into an adult, but my mom returns back to her childhood. As time goes by, I grow into an adult, but my mom returns back to her childhood.

It was a run-on sentence before.

Actually, it is that sheshe does acts like a child. Actually, she does act like a child.

In our hometown, there is a little of infrastructure like bus and subwaypublic transportation available. In our hometown, there is little public transportation available.

In our hometown, there is a little of infrastructure like busses and subways. In our hometown, there is little infrastructure like busses and subways.

She only went to Beijing once atin her thirtyies with my cousion and meI. She only went to Beijing once in her thirties with my cousin and I.

She only went to Beijing once at ther age of thirty with my cousion and me. She only went to Beijing once at the age of thirty with my cousin and me.

It was a celebration for me because I went to my grade 7graduated from primary school. It was a celebration for me because I graduated from primary school.

It was a celebration for me because I went to my grade 7 from primary school. It was a celebration for me because I went to grade 7 from primary school.

Her aAnother trip for her was going to Shanghai. Another trip for her was going to Shanghai.

Her another trip was going to Shanghai. Her other trip was going to Shanghai.

Of course, it’ was because of me again. Of course, it was because of me again.

I got my college degree at there. I got my college degree there.

Before I left Shanghai, I invited my parents to have a travel in Shanghaivisit me there. Before I left Shanghai, I invited my parents to visit me there.

Before I left Shanghai, I invited my parents to have a travel into Shanghai. Before I left Shanghai, I invited my parents travel to Shanghai.

I said a lot for provingearnestly tried to convince her that she was lack ofmissing the experiences of living in a mordern city. I earnestly tried to convince her that she was missing the experiences of living in a modern city.

I said a lot for proving that she was lack of the experiences of living in mordern city. I said a lot for proving that she was lack of the experiences of living in modern city.

She cannot's unable to order the train tickets or thebook hotels through the smart phone APPs apps. She's unable to order train tickets or book hotels through smart phone apps.

She cannot order thea train ticket or thebook a hotel room through the smart phone APPapps . She cannot order a train ticket or book a hotel room through smart phone apps .

SheLike a child, she will never take the subway alone. Like a child, she will never take the subway alone.

She never takes the subway alone. She never takes the subway alone.

Subject-verb agreement

I have to go to work aton Friday which means my mom should take the subway from the train station to my house alone. I have to go to work on Friday which means my mom should take the subway from the train station to my house alone.

I have to go to work aton Friday which means my mom shouldwill have to take the subway from the train station to my house alone. I have to go to work on Friday which means my mom will have to take the subway from the train station to my house alone.

She said it’sshe'll be OK but I still get nervous. She said she'll be OK but I still get nervous.

It seems that she is a little girl who exicis excited to go to school by herself, I am the anxious mother. It seems that she is a little girl who is excited to go to school by herself, I am the anxious mother.

It seems that she is a little girl who exicited to go to school by herself, and I am the anxious mother. It seems that she is a little girl who excited to go to school by herself, and I am the anxious mother.

Run-on sentence

Was she worryied about me when I amwas a little girl planning to go to school by myself? lol. Was she worried about me when I was a little girl planning to go to school by myself? lol.

WasDid she worry about me when I amwas a little girl plan to gogoing to school by myself? lol. Did she worry about me when I was a little girl going to school by myself? lol.

HI hope everything igoes fine. I hope everything goes fine.

Hopefully everthing is fine. Hopefully everthing is fine.