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SummerTeaWater

July 17, 2021

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Back Pain

These days, I had mind back pain.

So I went to a doctor, and he said it was not a good condition because of bad posture.

Sitting at my desk for a long time, could be burden on my back, too.

He recommend to do physical therapies regularly.

Working out my core muscles help relieve my pain as well.

Most important thing is that I need to sit up straight.

I hope my back will be good soon.

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Back Pain

These days, I have had minld back pain.

'had' means you don't have it any more

So I went to a doctor, and he said it was not a goodthat my condition because ofis due to bad posture.

Sitting at my desk for a long time, could be burden on my back, too.

He recommend me to do physical therapies regularly.

Working out my core muscles cam help relieve my pain as well.

Most important thing is that I need to sit up straight.

I hope my back will be goodget better soon.

Feedback

Sitting posture is actually very important... I've been getting a sore back too haha
I hope your back pain gets better soon!

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SummerTeaWater

July 18, 2021

402

I appreciate your kindness.

Back Pain


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

These days, I had mind back pain.


These days, I have had minld back pain.

'had' means you don't have it any more

So I went to a doctor, and he said it was not a good condition because of bad posture.


So I went to a doctor, and he said it was not a goodthat my condition because ofis due to bad posture.

Sitting at my desk for a long time, could be burden on my back, too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He recommend to do physical therapies regularly.


He recommend me to do physical therapies regularly.

Working out my core muscles help relieve my pain as well.


Working out my core muscles cam help relieve my pain as well.

Most important thing is that I need to sit up straight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope my back will be good soon.


I hope my back will be goodget better soon.

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