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Book day

Today was a book day that students got to wear something that relate to a character of their favourite book.I expected people who is in kindergerten or primary school were wearing something, but actually people who is in highschool were wearing something too.My one of friend was also wearing black clothes all over her body, and I asked her which book did she come up with that clothes from but I didn't reallyunderstand it .
Any way, I am going to get up earlier than usual to get more time to study because I didn't enough time to study mathematics.

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Book day

Today was a bookBook Day, a day that students got to wear something that relates to a character ofrom their favourite book.

I expected people who isit to only be people in kindergearten or primary school who were wearing something, but actually people who is in high schoolers were wearing somethings too.

People = plural = are, not is

People in high school --> you can just say "high schoolers" (also kindergarteners and primary schoolers)

Fun fact - kindergarten means children garden in German (kinder = children, garten = garden). I always think of this when I see the word kindergarten.

My oOne of my friends was also wearing all black clothes all over her body, and I asked her which book did she come up with thatget the idea for those clothes from, but I didn't really understand it her answer.

All black clothes/clothing = all of her clothes were black

"All over her body" sounds kind of awkward, I wouldn't use this phrasing.

I wasn't sure what you were referring to with "it" here, so I tried to make it clearer.

Any way, I am going to get up earlier than usual to get more time to study because I didn't enough time to study mathematics.

It would sound more natural if you specified when you are referring too in this sentence --> ie. I am going to get up earlier than usual tomorrow...

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Today was a book day that students got to wear something that relate to a character of their favourite book.


Today was a bookBook Day, a day that students got to wear something that relates to a character ofrom their favourite book.

I expected people who is in kindergerten or primary school were wearing something, but actually people who is in highschool were wearing something too.


I expected people who isit to only be people in kindergearten or primary school who were wearing something, but actually people who is in high schoolers were wearing somethings too.

People = plural = are, not is People in high school --> you can just say "high schoolers" (also kindergarteners and primary schoolers) Fun fact - kindergarten means children garden in German (kinder = children, garten = garden). I always think of this when I see the word kindergarten.

My one of friend was also wearing black clothes all over her body, and I asked her which book did she come up with that clothes from but I didn't reallyunderstand it .


My oOne of my friends was also wearing all black clothes all over her body, and I asked her which book did she come up with thatget the idea for those clothes from, but I didn't really understand it her answer.

All black clothes/clothing = all of her clothes were black "All over her body" sounds kind of awkward, I wouldn't use this phrasing. I wasn't sure what you were referring to with "it" here, so I tried to make it clearer.

Any way, I am going to get up earlier than usual to get more time to study because I didn't enough time to study mathematics.


Any way, I am going to get up earlier than usual to get more time to study because I didn't enough time to study mathematics.

It would sound more natural if you specified when you are referring too in this sentence --> ie. I am going to get up earlier than usual tomorrow...

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