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Day 15: Developing the Habit of Finishing part 1

A problem that I have is abandon my ideas or personal projects. For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day and after about two weeks I quit. However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects. The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieve everything that we want. I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline. I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it. So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.

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For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day and after about two weeks I quit.

I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.

I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it.

So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.

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Jan. 25, 2023

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I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it.

So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.

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Jan. 25, 2023

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Day 15: Developing the Habit of Finishing part 1

I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.

I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it.

So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 25, 2023

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Day 15: Developing the Habit of Finishing part 1


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Grammatical consistency !

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A problem that I have is abandon my ideas or personal projects.


A problem that I have is abandoning my ideas or personal projects. A problem that I have is abandoning my ideas or personal projects.

or "A problem I have is that I abandon my..."

AOne problematic habit that I have is abandoning my ideas or personal projects. One problematic habit that I have is abandoning my ideas or personal projects.

Muy sofisticado

AOne problem that I have is that I (tend to/often/always) abandon my ideas or personal projects. One problem that I have is that I (tend to/often/always) abandon my ideas or personal projects.

A problem that I have is that I abandon my ideas or personal projects. A problem that I have is that I abandon my ideas or personal projects.

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For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day and after about two weeks I quit.


For example, three months ago I starttried to start meditate every day anding once a day, but after about two weeks I quitended up quitting. For example, three months ago I tried to start meditating once a day, but after about two weeks I ended up quitting.

Very natural, and the way you had it originally (I started to…) implies that you are still doing it, well emphasises it as if this is the fact of the matter. It makes more stylistic sense with the way a native would say it with my suggestion !

For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day, and after about two weeks, I quit. For example, three months ago I started to meditate every day, and after about two weeks, I quit.

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However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects.


However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects. However, today I read an article about how to finish our projects.

However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects. However, today I read an article about how to finish our projects.

However, today I have read an article about how to finish our projects. However, today I read an article about how to finish our projects.

However, today I haveToday, however, I read an article about how to finish our projects. Today, however, I read an article about how to finish our projects.

I need to start mindfulness meditation again because I really need it.


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The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieve everything that we want.


The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieveing everything that we want. The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieving everything that we want.

The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieving everything that we want/the habit of finishing is the key to achieve everything that we want. The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieving everything that we want/the habit of finishing is the key to achieve everything that we want.

The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieve (everything that/whatever) we want. The article says that having deadlines and developing the habit of finishing is key to achieve (everything that/whatever) we want.

The article says that having deadlines and developing thea habit of finishing is key to achieve everything that we want. The article says that having deadlines and developing a habit of finishing is key to achieve everything that we want.

I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.


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I hadoriginally started to meditateing because my mind iwas always distracting me when I'med whilst I was trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline. I originally started meditating because my mind was always distracted whilst I was trying to focus on my studies, and also to improve my discipline.

Tense consistency ! Stylistic preferences of a C1 native !

I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I'm trying to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline. I had started to meditate because my mind is always distracting me when I try to focus on my studies, and also because meditation helps me to improve my discipline.

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So, I'm going to set a goal and a deadline.


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