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Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I have kept going hiking so far.

I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM. After I get off bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.

There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there. Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer. When I am hiking, I will play music using my phone.

After I end the hiking, I will stretch my hands and legs. I learn those stretching methods online.

When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.

I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening everyday. After the lesson, I go hiking one more time.

Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.

I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel it is very helpful for my body.

I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.

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July 23, 2022

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Thank you very much

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I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM.

There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there.

After the lesson, I go hiking one more time.

Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.

I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.

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July 14, 2022

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July 14, 2022

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Thank you very much Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I’ve kept going hiking. I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM. After I get out of bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking. There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there. Before I start hiking, I set a thirty minute timer. When I’m hiking, I’ll play music on my phone. After I’m done hiking, I do hand and leg stretches. I learned how to stretch online. When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed. I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening every day. After the lesson, I go hiking one more time. Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers. I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel like it’s good for my body. I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.

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I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM.

When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.

I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening everyday.

Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.

I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.

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Jack

July 14, 2022

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Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer.

Why?

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Jack

July 14, 2022

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everettj

July 15, 2022

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To be sure that I hike for enough time.

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After I get off bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.


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There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there.


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Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer.


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When I am hiking, I will play music using my phone.


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After I end the hiking, I will stretch my hands and legs.


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I learn those stretching methods online.


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When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.


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I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening everyday.


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Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.


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I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel it is very helpful for my body.


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I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.


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