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lsmhhhhh

Dec. 14, 2020

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A happy day

Today, I use the Blue tooth keyboard to write journal, while yesterday I use the phone to record everyday, but I feel uncomfortable. Yesterday, it’s extremely cool in our city. Recently, we have a exam that principle of automatic control, so I often go to library to study it. Library is further from our dormitory, probably the distance has two km. I want to eat dinner at 5 p.m., due to the awful climate, I go back the dormitory ahead of time. I and my boyfriend go to the express site to put our one year annual gift that I send he. He like it.


今天我用蓝牙鼠标写这篇日记,昨天我直接用手机写的,感觉不是很舒服。昨天,我们这里很冷,因为要考试了,所以我最近经常去图书馆,图书馆离我们寝室很远,大概有两公里。原来我打算在下午5点半去吃饭,但是走出图书馆之后发现外面很冷,我就提前回了寝室。和我的男朋友一起去取我送给他的一周年礼物,他说感觉很好。

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lsmhhhhh

Dec. 15, 2020

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I wanted to eat dinner at 5 p.m., but due to the awful climate, I goweather, I went back to the dormitory ahead of time.

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Dec. 15, 2020

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oceandrive76

Dec. 15, 2020

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Can you explain it? I can't understand '-',thank you.

A happy day


A hHappy dDay A Happy Day

Today, I use the Blue tooth keyboard to write journal, while yesterday I use the phone to record everyday, but I feel uncomfortable.


Today, I use the Bd a blue tooth keyboard to write this journal, while yesterday I use the phone to record everydaything, but Iit makes me feel uncomfortable. Today, I used a bluetooth keyboard to write this journal, while yesterday I use the phone to record everything, but it makes me feel uncomfortable.

Yesterday, it’s extremely cool in our city.


Yesterday, it’s was extremely cool in our city. Yesterday, it was extremely cool in our city.

Recently, we have a exam that principle of automatic control, so I often go to library to study it.


Recently, we haved an exam thaton the principles of automatic control, so I often gowent to library to study it. Recently, we had an exam on the principles of automatic control, so I often went to library to study.

Most of the time, it’s “an” instead of “a” before a vowel.

Library is further from our dormitory, probably the distance has two km.


LThe library is further from our dormitory, so probably the distance hasaround two km. The library is further from our dormitory, so probably around two km.

I want to eat dinner at 5 p.m., due to the awful climate, I go back the dormitory ahead of time.


I wanted to eat dinner at 5 p.m., but due to the awful climate, I goweather, I went back to the dormitory ahead of time. I wanted to eat dinner at 5 p.m., but due to the awful weather, I went back to the dormitory ahead of time.

I and my boyfriend go to the express site to put our one year annual gift that I send he.


I and mMy boyfriend goand I went to the express site to pucollect our one year annual gift that I send heim. My boyfriend and I went to the express site to collect our one year annual gift that I send him.

By “express site” do you mean “post office”? In English, it’s grammatically correct to put other people before you in a sentence, (“You and I”, “Charles and me”, etc.), although many native speakers often don’t follow this rule.

He like it.


He likes it. He likes it.

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