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I vividly remember, that a few years ago I have began learning 3D. After my classes, I feel tired and wanted to relax. For reduce my tired, I frequently played minecraft which was really interesting. Also, Doing 3d helps improve your creativity. However, learning 3D requires takes time. If you want a 3D as your main job you should pay more attention and time than as a hobby.
Я ярко помню, несколько лет тому назад я начал изучать 3Д. После уроков я был уставший и хотел отдохнуть. Что-бы отдохнуть, я часто играл в Майнкрафт который был очень интересным. Также, 3Д помогает улучшить вашу креативность. Однако, изучение 3Д требует времени. Если вы хотите 3Д как вашу основную работу, вам придется тратить больше внимания и времени чем просто для хобби.
Making 3d is easy?
I vividly remember, that a few years ago I have began learning 3D beginning to learn 3D design a few years ago.
I vividly remember beginning to learn 3D design a few years ago.
It seems like this sentence should connect with the second one. This correction makes the sentence stand alone, but there are alternative possible corrections that focus on joining this sentence and the next one.
This sentence now sounds natural to me, but other ways work too.
"3D" alone doesn't mean anything. Did you mean to say 3D animation or 3D design?
After my classes, I would feel tired and wanted to relax. After my classes, I would feel tired and wanted to relax.
ForTo reduce my tired, Iness, I would frequently played m Minecraft, which was really interesting.
To reduce my tiredness, I would frequently play Minecraft, which was really interesting.
Also, Doing 3dworking on 3D designs helps improve your creativity.
Also, working on 3D designs helps improve your creativity.
However, learning 3Dto make 3D designs requires takes time.
However, learning to make 3D designs requires takes time.
If you want a 3Dto work in 3D design as your main job you should paydedicate more attention and time than as if it were a hobby.
If you want to work in 3D design as your main job you should dedicate more attention and time than as if it were a hobby.
I changed paid to dedicate. The reason why is because "paid attention" works, but "paid time" doesn't. But you can say "dedicate time and attention"...
MIs making 3d isD design easy?
Is making 3D design easy?
I am guessing that by "3D" you mean 3D design.
Also it is more gramatically correct to put the "is" at the start.
I vividly remember, that a few years ago, I have began learning 3D design.
I vividly remember that a few years ago, I began learning 3D design.
Pretty nice vocabulary here!
No need for the comma or "have".
After my classes, I feelt tired and wanted to relax.
After my classes, I felt tired and wanted to relax.
This is past so "felt" is used.
ForTo reduce my tiredexhaustion, I frequently played minecraft, which was really interestingfun.
To reduce my exhaustion, I frequently played minecraft, which was really fun.
Exhausted/Exhaustion is a nice synonym for tired/tiredness.
I think "fun" is the more accurate word to use instead of "interesting" here.
Also, "Minecraft" is a proper noun, so it should be capitalized.
Also, Ddoing 3dD design helps improve your creativity.
Also, doing 3D design helps improve your creativity.
Watch your capitalization.
However, learning 3D design requires takes time. However, learning 3D design requires takes time.
If you want a 3D as your main job you should pay more attention and time than as a hobbyto be a 3D designer, you should devote more time and attention to it.
If you want to be a 3D designer, you should devote more time and attention to it.
A person who does 3D design as their main job is called a 3D designer.
The last part of the sentence is just a shorter and more accurate way to write what you meant to say.
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I noticed that your vocabulary is actually quite good. I would recommend that you work on the cohesiveness of your text so that it doesn't feel like separate sentences just glued together. The best way to improve this is actually by reading books. Additionally, focus on the placement of your comma, but again, that is pretty hard even for natives. Overall, try to read whenever you have free time and keep it up!
I vividly remember, that a few years ago I have began learning 3D.
I vividly remember that a few years ago I began learning 3D.
began is past tense. the specific time that you start something uses past tense.
After my classes, I feelt tired and wanted to relax.
After my classes, I felt tired and wanted to relax.
past tense :)
Forto reduce my tiredness, I frequently played minecraft which was really interesting.
to reduce my tiredness, I frequently played minecraft which was really interesting.
tired is an adjective ( i am tired), but tiredness is the feeling itself, the noun, to talk about it in other contexts.
Also, Doing 3d (art? games?) helps to improve your creativity. Also, Doing 3d (art? games?) helps to improve your creativity.
3D can refer to many things, so its typically used as an adjective. to make it clear to the reader, it's better to be specific about what 3D: games, movies, printing, etc
However, learning 3D requires takes time.
However, learning 3D takes time.
2 options: 'learning 3D requires a lot of time', or 'learning 3D takes time'
If you want a 3D (gaming? printing?) as your main job, you should pay more attention and time thano it than you would as a hobby.
If you want 3D (gaming? printing?) as your main job, you should pay more attention and time to it than you would as a hobby.
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well done!
Making 3d3D modeling (or: 3D design) is easy?
3D modeling (or: 3D design) is easy?
I vividly remember, that a few years ago I have began learning 3D modeling/design.
I vividly remember that a few years ago I began learning 3D modeling/design.
"3D" by itself is an adjective, so this should be 3D modeling (or 3D design)
After my classes, I feelt tired and wanted to relax.
After my classes, I felt tired and wanted to relax.
Past tense agreement
For reduceing my tiredness, I frequently played mMinecraft, which was really interestingfun.
For reducing my tiredness, I frequently played Minecraft, which was really fun.
"Reducing my tiredness" would be grammatically correct but it sounds strange. "To relax", "To unwind", or "To recharge" would be more natural.
You could probably combine this sentence with the previous one into something like
"After my classes, I felt tired and wanted to relax, so I frequently played Minecraft (...)"
I think "fun" sounds more natural in this context. "Interesting" isn't wrong, but it has more of an intellectual connotation - you might study or research something that you find interesting, whereas "fun" is more of a simple enjoyment of something.
Also, D(doing) 3dD modeling/design helps improve your creativity.
Also, (doing) 3D modeling/design helps improve your creativity.
'doing' is optional; either way sounds fine
However, learning 3D requiresmodeling/design takes time.
However, learning 3D modeling/design takes time.
Could also just say "However, learning it takes time", since the subject matter is already clear from the previous sentence
If you want a 3Dto do 3D modeling/design as your main job, you should paydevote more attention and time than aso it than you would for a hobby.
If you want to do 3D modeling/design as your main job, you should devote more attention and time to it than you would for a hobby.
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Making 3d is easy?
I am guessing that by "3D" you mean 3D design. Also it is more gramatically correct to put the "is" at the start. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I vividly remember, that a few years ago I have began learning 3D.
I vividly remember "3D" by itself is an adjective, so this should be 3D modeling (or 3D design)
I vividly remember began is past tense. the specific time that you start something uses past tense.
I vividly remember Pretty nice vocabulary here! No need for the comma or "have".
I vividly remember It seems like this sentence should connect with the second one. This correction makes the sentence stand alone, but there are alternative possible corrections that focus on joining this sentence and the next one. This sentence now sounds natural to me, but other ways work too. "3D" alone doesn't mean anything. Did you mean to say 3D animation or 3D design? |
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After my classes, I feel tired and wanted to relax.
After my classes, I fe Past tense agreement
After my classes, I fe past tense :)
After my classes, I fe This is past so "felt" is used. After my classes, I would feel tired and wanted to relax. After my classes, I would feel tired and wanted to relax. |
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For reduce my tired, I frequently played minecraft which was really interesting.
For reduc "Reducing my tiredness" would be grammatically correct but it sounds strange. "To relax", "To unwind", or "To recharge" would be more natural. You could probably combine this sentence with the previous one into something like "After my classes, I felt tired and wanted to relax, so I frequently played Minecraft (...)" I think "fun" sounds more natural in this context. "Interesting" isn't wrong, but it has more of an intellectual connotation - you might study or research something that you find interesting, whereas "fun" is more of a simple enjoyment of something.
tired is an adjective ( i am tired), but tiredness is the feeling itself, the noun, to talk about it in other contexts.
Exhausted/Exhaustion is a nice synonym for tired/tiredness. I think "fun" is the more accurate word to use instead of "interesting" here. Also, "Minecraft" is a proper noun, so it should be capitalized.
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Also, Doing 3d helps improve your creativity.
Also, 'doing' is optional; either way sounds fine Also, Doing 3d (art? games?) helps to improve your creativity. Also, Doing 3d (art? games?) helps to improve your creativity. 3D can refer to many things, so its typically used as an adjective. to make it clear to the reader, it's better to be specific about what 3D: games, movies, printing, etc
Also, Watch your capitalization.
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However, learning 3D requires takes time.
However, learning 3D Could also just say "However, learning it takes time", since the subject matter is already clear from the previous sentence
However, learning 3D 2 options: 'learning 3D requires a lot of time', or 'learning 3D takes time' However, learning 3D design requires takes time. However, learning 3D design requires takes time.
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If you want a 3D as your main job you should pay more attention and time than as a hobby.
If you want
If you want
If you want A person who does 3D design as their main job is called a 3D designer. The last part of the sentence is just a shorter and more accurate way to write what you meant to say.
If you want I changed paid to dedicate. The reason why is because "paid attention" works, but "paid time" doesn't. But you can say "dedicate time and attention"... |
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