June 6, 2020
Cat
I slept too much today until 5PM. Maybe, it's because I played soccer with my friends until 5AM. For that reason, I don't have particular incident today to talk about, so I'll talk about cats. I really really love cats. I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely cat person. To be honest, I don't know much of a reason myself, but I love cats. I've never had a cat due to the rules of my house even though I love cats so much. I will definitely get two cats in the future.
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I slept too much today; I didn't get up until 5PM. I slept too much today; I didn't get up until 5PM.
"Sleep too much" and "sleep until" are both valid constructions on their own, but combining them doesn't really work. I think you might be able to get away with it if you placed a comma before "until," but I would prefer something like this.
Maybe, it's because I played soccer with my friends until 5AM.
Maybe it's because I played soccer with my friends until 5AM.
Verbally, there can be a pause after "maybe" if you're making a suggestion, like you are here, but in writing, there is generally no comma.
For that reason, I don't have particular incident today to talk about, so I'll talk about cats.
I really really love cats.
I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person. I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person.
To be honest, I don't know much of areally know the reason why myself, but I love cats.
To be honest, I don't really know the reason why myself, but I love cats.
I've never had a cat due to the rules of my house even though I love cats so much, due to the rules in my house.
I've never had a cat even though I love cats so much, due to the rules in my house.
Or, if applicable, you could write something like:
- my apartment rules
- because my apartment/lease doesn't allow them
But these are mostly situations that come up if you're renting or if you live somewhere that might restrict pet ownership, like certain high-rise buildings.
I will definitely get two cats in the future.
June 9, 2020
Thank you so much!
Cat
I slept too much today; until 5PM. I slept too much today; until 5PM.
Maybe, it's because I played soccer with my friends until 5AM.
Maybe it's because I played soccer with my friends until 5AM.
For that reason,That's why I don't have a particular incident today to talk about today , so I'll talk about cats.
That's why I don't have a particular incident to talk about today , so I'll talk about cats.
"For that reason" is correct, but "that's why" sounds more natural in speech.
I really really love cats.
I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person. I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person.
To be honest, I don't know much of a reason myselfmyself don't really know why, but I love catsthem.
To be honest, I myself don't really know why, but I love them.
I've never had a cat due to the rules ofin my house, even though I love cats so much.
I've never had a cat due to the rules in my house, even though I love cats so much.
I will definitely get two cats in the future.
June 7, 2020
I love cats as well! Now that I want to travel more in the summers, having an old cat that seems to be picky with her food makes me wish I didn't have one, but she is sweet and is sitting on my lap as I type!
June 9, 2020
Thanks for your correction.
Oh, how cute!
What's her name?:)
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I slept too much today until 5PM. I slept too much today; until 5PM. I slept too much today; until 5PM. I slept too much today; I didn't get up until 5PM. I slept too much today; I didn't get up until 5PM. "Sleep too much" and "sleep until" are both valid constructions on their own, but combining them doesn't really work. I think you might be able to get away with it if you placed a comma before "until," but I would prefer something like this. |
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Maybe, it's because I played soccer with my friends until 5AM.
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Maybe Verbally, there can be a pause after "maybe" if you're making a suggestion, like you are here, but in writing, there is generally no comma. |
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For that reason, I don't have particular incident today to talk about, so I'll talk about cats.
"For that reason" is correct, but "that's why" sounds more natural in speech. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I really really love cats. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely cat person. I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person. I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person. I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person. I love dogs too, but I'm absolutely a cat person. |
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To be honest, I don't know much of a reason myself, but I love cats.
To be honest, I
To be honest, I don't |
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I've never had a cat due to the rules of my house even though I love cats so much.
I've never had a cat due to the rules
I've never had a cat Or, if applicable, you could write something like: - my apartment rules - because my apartment/lease doesn't allow them But these are mostly situations that come up if you're renting or if you live somewhere that might restrict pet ownership, like certain high-rise buildings. |
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I will definitely get two cats in the future. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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