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Tradition Chinese Medicine Doctor

This afternoon I took a half-day off and went to see a Traditional Chinese Doctor named Dr. Chao for my feet pain. I heard about the doctor from my wife's bestie. She mentioned that Dr. Chao was very professional and Doctor Chao's treatments worked like a charm. Even her mother's diabetes had lasted for really a long time, after Doctor Chao's one month treatment it was brought under control.
My feet have been on-and-off aching since half a year ago. I saw Western doctors twice but they didn't help. So I decided to try a TCM doctor. Hope it works this time.

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Traditional Chinese Medicine Doctor

This afternoon, I took a half-day off and went to see a Ttraditional Chinese Ddoctor named Dr. Chao for my feeoot pain.

I heard about the doctor from my wife's bestie/best friend.

In a casual context, bestie works here. In a neutral context or a more formal context, use best friend.

She mentioned that Dr. Chao was very professional, and Doctor Chao'stheir treatments worked like a charm.

Since I can't determine Dr. Chao's gender, I used their as a gender neutral pronoun.

Even her mother's diabetes had lasted for really a long time, after Doctor Chao's prior to coming to Dr. Chao. After their one -month treatment, it was brought under control.

My feet have been aching on-and-off aching since a half a year ago.

I saw Western doctors twice, but they didn't help.

So I decided to try a TCM doctortraditional Chinese medicine this time around.

Hope it works this time.

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Hope your feet get better.

Tradition Chinese Medicine Doctor

This afternoon I took a half-day off and went to see a Ttraditional Chinese Doctor named Dr. Chao for my feeoot pain.

*even if it is both feet, you would say 'foot pain'

I heard about the doctor from my wife's bestie.

She mentioned that Dr. Chao was very professional, and Doctor Chao's treatments worked like a charm.

Even her mother's diabetes that had lasted for really a long time, after Doctor Chao's one month treatment it was brought under control.

You might want to rearrange this one for clarity.
After just one month of treatment with Dr. Chao, her mother's long-time diabetes was brought under control.

My feet have been aching on-and-off aching since half a year ago.

*or
My feet have been aching on and off for half a year now.

I saw Western doctors twice but they didn't help.

So I decided to try a TCM doctor.

Hope it works this time.

Feedback

Fingers crossed! Best of luck. I hope it helps.

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Traditional Chinese Medicine Doctor

This afternoon I took a half-day off and went to see a Traditional Chinese Doctor named Dr. Chao for my feet pain.


This afternoon I took a half-day off and went to see a Ttraditional Chinese Doctor named Dr. Chao for my feeoot pain.

*even if it is both feet, you would say 'foot pain'

This afternoon, I took a half-day off and went to see a Ttraditional Chinese Ddoctor named Dr. Chao for my feeoot pain.

I heard about the doctor from my wife's bestie.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I heard about the doctor from my wife's bestie/best friend.

In a casual context, bestie works here. In a neutral context or a more formal context, use best friend.

She mentioned that Dr. Chao was very professional and Doctor Chao's treatments worked like a charm.


She mentioned that Dr. Chao was very professional, and Doctor Chao's treatments worked like a charm.

She mentioned that Dr. Chao was very professional, and Doctor Chao'stheir treatments worked like a charm.

Since I can't determine Dr. Chao's gender, I used their as a gender neutral pronoun.

Even her mother's diabetes had lasted for really a long time, after Doctor Chao's one month treatment it was brought under control.


Even her mother's diabetes that had lasted for really a long time, after Doctor Chao's one month treatment it was brought under control.

You might want to rearrange this one for clarity. After just one month of treatment with Dr. Chao, her mother's long-time diabetes was brought under control.

Even her mother's diabetes had lasted for really a long time, after Doctor Chao's prior to coming to Dr. Chao. After their one -month treatment, it was brought under control.

My feet have been on-and-off aching since half a year ago.


My feet have been aching on-and-off aching since half a year ago.

*or My feet have been aching on and off for half a year now.

My feet have been aching on-and-off aching since a half a year ago.

I saw Western doctors twice but they didn't help.


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I saw Western doctors twice, but they didn't help.

So I decided to try a TCM doctor.


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So I decided to try a TCM doctortraditional Chinese medicine this time around.

Hope it works this time.


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