I saw athe news about Ariana Grande's brief stepping back from the public life due to the public scrutiny. I saw the news about Ariana Grande's brief stepping back from public life due to public scrutiny.

I saw athe news about Ariana Grande's taking a brief stepping back/brief break from the public life due to the public scrutiny. I saw the news about Ariana Grande taking a brief step back/brief break from public life due to public scrutiny.

I saw athe news about Ariana Grande's brief stepping back from the public life due to the public scrutiny. I saw the news about Ariana Grande's brief step back from public life due to public scrutiny.

You could keep it as "the public scrutiny" if you want more emphasis, but it's not technically necessary.

Since I'm such a huge fan of hers, I'm truly shocked, and I've been thinking about what's the best way to show your care for others. Since I'm such a huge fan of hers, I'm truly shocked, and I've been thinking about what's the best way to show your care for others.

Since I'm such a huge fan of hers, I'm truly shocked, and I've been thinking w: What's the best way to show that your care for others.? Since I'm such a huge fan of hers, I'm truly shocked, and I've been thinking: What's the best way to show that you care for others?

Since I'm such a huge fan of hers, I'm truly shocked, and I've been thinkingwondering/it's made me wonder what's the best way is to show your care for others. Since I'm such a huge fan of hers I'm truly shocked, and I've been wondering/it's made me wonder what the best way is to show your care for others.

"I've been wondering" is fine here, but you could also write "it's made me wonder" to emphasise that the news about Ariana has prompted you to think about this. I think "wondering" works better here because you're asking yourself a question.

The cruelty of commenting on someone else's appearance is extreme, because you can't change your features as easily as to modifying your behavior. The cruelty of commenting on someone else's appearance is extreme because you can't change your features as easily as modifying your behavior.

The cruelty of commenting on someone else's appearance is extreme, because you can't change your features as easily as to modifying your behavior. The cruelty of commenting on someone else's appearance is extreme, because you can't change your features as easily as modifying your behavior.

Even if you intend it as a compliment, it can make people feel being judged or self-conscious. Even if you intend it as a compliment, it can make people feel judged or self-conscious.

Even if you intend it as a compliment, it can make people feel judged/like they're being judged or self-conscious. Even if you intend it as a compliment, it can make people feel judged/like they're being judged or self-conscious.

As for today's conclusion, one good way is to build a relationship where one can express their honest feeling,s and adapt how you act to them. As for today's conclusion, one good way is to build a relationship where one can express their honest feelings and adapt how you act to them.

As for today's conclusion, one good way is to build a relationship where one can express theirone's honest feelings, and adaptmodify how youone acts in response to them. As for today's conclusion, one good way is to build a relationship where one can express one's honest feelings, and modify how one acts in response to them.

This is kinda why native English speakers often use "you" instead of "one". Sentences get a bit complicated with possessive pronouns. Still, it's your choice.

As for today's conclusion, one good way is to build a relationship where one can express their honest feelings, and adapt how you act/respond to them. As for today's conclusion, one good way is to build a relationship where one can express their honest feelings, and adapt how you act/respond to them.

"Feelings" is always a plural noun.