Barcelona, Spain
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Barcelona is overloaded with tourists, and it's really annoying. Some used water guns against tourists sitting outside restaurants on the streets. Thousands of people took to the streets to protest against overtourism in Barcelona. Some banners read: "Barcelona is not for sale, Go back home". The protests stemmed from the skyrocketing cost of housing in Barcelona, which has risen by 68% over the past ten years. To combat this phenomenon, the mayor said she wants to increase the tax for cruise tourists who stay in the city for less than 12 hours. By 2029, there will only be traditional hotels or bed and breakfasts in the Spanish city. To combat overtourism, a bus line disappeared from Google Maps, because too many tourists prevented residents from boarding the public transport.
巴塞罗那的游客实在太多了，这真的很烦人。 一些人在街上用水枪攻击坐在餐馆外的游客。 成千上万的人走上巴塞罗那街头抗议过度旅游的现象。 一些横幅上写：巴塞罗那不是待售的城市，滚回家去。 抗议活动源于巴塞罗那飞涨的房价，在过去十年中上涨了68%。 为了应对这种现象，市长希望提高对游轮的税收，特别是那些停留不足12小时的游客。 到2029年，这座西班牙城市将只保留传统酒店和民宿的形式。 为应对过度旅游的问题，一条公交线路从谷歌地图消失，因为太多游客阻碍了当地居民乘坐公共交通。
Some locals used water guns against tourists sitting outside restaurants on the streets.
This just helps add clarity to your sentence.
Some banners read: "Barcelona is not for sale, Gogo back home".
No need to capitalise after a comma, only for the start of a new sentence.
To combat overtourism, a bus line disappeared from Google Maps, because too many tourists preventedwere using it and preventing residents from boarding the public transportbeing able to use it.
OR: "the presence of too many tourists prevented residents from being able to use it."
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