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Jan. 4, 2021

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我的寒假

这寒假我和我家人一起去夏威夷。我们住在夏威夷一个星期。因为新冠肺炎,游客很少。我们以前坐飞机去夏威夷必须进行冠状病毒的测试。我们的假期很玩儿。我最喜欢做的事情是浮潜,因为在夏威夷,鱼很多又很美。

我跟家人一起过圣诞节。我们吃很多的食物,并且开礼物。我为新年做中餐。我做了鱼,寿面,饺子,春卷,和汤圆。这些菜通常是农历新年做的,但是我想做中餐,而且我想练习做中国菜,这样我春节的时候会做。

我的寒假过得很快,今天是我开始冬天学期。我的寒假很好,又很轻松,所以我有点不开心开始学期,不过我们不可以一直有假期,学习,工作也很重要。


This winter vacation I went to Hawaii for a week with my family. Because of coronavirus, there were very few tourists. Before we flew to Hawaii, we had to be tested for coronavirus. Our vacation was very fun. My favorite thing we did was go snorkeling because in Hawaii there are a lot of beautiful fish.

I celebrated Christmas with my family. We ate a lot of food and opened presents. For New Year's I made Chinese food. I made fish, longevity noodles, dumplings, spring rolls, and glutinous rice balls. These dishes are normally made on Chinese New Year. However, I felt like making Chinese food and I wanted to practice so that I could make it for Chinese New Year.

My winter vacation went by very fast. Today is the first day of winter term. My winter vacation was very good and relaxing, so I am a little sad to start the term. However, we cannot be on vacation all the time. Work and school are also important.

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我的寒假

因为新冠肺炎,游客很少。

我们以前坐飞机去夏威夷必须进行冠状病毒的测试。

我跟家人一起过圣诞节。

我为新年做中餐。

我做了鱼,寿面,饺子,春卷,和汤圆。

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song_yun

Jan. 5, 2021

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我的寒假


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这寒假我和我家人一起去夏威夷。


寒假我和家人一起去夏威夷。 寒假我和家人一起去夏威夷。

我们住在夏威夷一个星期。


我们在夏威夷住了一个星期。 我们在夏威夷住了一个星期。

因为新冠肺炎,游客很少。


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我们以前坐飞机去夏威夷必须进行冠状病毒的测试。


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我们的假期很玩儿。


我们的假期很玩儿。 我们的假期很玩儿。

我最喜欢做的事情是浮潜,因为在夏威夷,鱼很多又很美。


我跟家人一起过圣诞节。


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我们吃很多的食物,并且开礼物。


我们吃很多的食物,并且开礼物。 我们吃很多的食物,并且开礼物。

我们有很多美食,而且收到好多礼物。

我为新年做中餐。


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我做了鱼,寿面,饺子,春卷,和汤圆。


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这些菜通常是农历新年做的,但是我想做中餐,而且我想练习做中国菜,这样我春节的时候会做。


这些菜通常是农历新年做的,但是我想做中餐,而且我想练习做中国菜,这样我春节的时候会做 这些菜通常是农历新年做的,但是我想做中餐,而且我想练习做中国菜,这样我春节的时候会做

我的寒假过得很快,今天是我开始冬天学期。


我的寒假过得很快,今天是我开始冬天学期的开始 我的寒假过得很快,今天是我冬天学期的开始

我的寒假很好,又很轻松,所以我有点不开心开始学期,不过我们不可以一直有假期,学习,工作也很重要。


我的寒假很好,很轻松,所以我有点不开心开始学期,不过我们不可以一直有假期,学习,工作也很重要。 我的寒假很好,很轻松,所以我有点不开心开始学期,不过我们不可以一直有假期,学习,工作也很重要。

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