April 24, 2024
Azalea in Jiuyangping
I went hiking again last Saturday.
The destination was a mountain in the Fuyang district of Hangzhou City, called Jiuyangping. The traffic was a little heavy and it was a little far from Shanghai, so it took us more than four hours to get there.
Nevertheless, we all thought it was worth it because the azalea flowers in the mountain were so beautiful. It was a good time for them to bloom.
You can see them in this video: https://youtu.be/L2tZg-5_jkQ
九仰坪的杜鹃花
上周六我又去徒步了。
目的地是杭州富阳区的一个山，九仰坪。交通有点拥堵，而且它离上海有点儿远，所以我们花了4个多小时才到那里。
不过我们都觉得很值，以为山里的杜鹃花太好看了。正是它们盛开的好季节。
你可以在这个视频里看花：https://youtu.be/L2tZg-5_jkQ
Azalea in Jiuyangping
I went hiking again last Saturday.
The destination was a mountain in the Fuyang district of Hangzhou City, called Jiuyangping.
The traffic was a little heavy and it was a little far from Shanghai, so it took us more than four hours to get there.
Nevertheless, we all thought it was worth it because the azalea flowers in the mountain were so beautiful.
It was a good time for them to bloom.
You can see them in this video: https://youtu.be/L2tZg-5_jkQ
Azaleas in Jiuyangping
I went hiking again last Saturday.
The destination was a mountain in the Fuyang district of Hangzhou City, called Jiuyangping.
The traffic was a little heavy, and it was a little far from Shanghai, so it took us more than four hours to get there.
For sentences with "X and Y" structure, if both X and Y could be complete sentences, then we add a comma before the "and."
Nevertheless, we all thought it was worth it because the azalea flowers ion the mountain were so beautiful.
It was a good time forprecisely the right time to see them to bloom.
Your original sentence is grammatically correct, I just adjusted it to better match the Chinese text.
You can see them in this video: https://youtu.be/L2tZg-5_jkQ
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Very well written, I had to really struggle to find corrections!
The flowers are gorgeous, thanks for sharing
April 24, 2024
Thanks for the corrections and feedback to help me improve!
I'm glad that you like the flowers.
Azalea in Jiuyangping
I went hiking again last/on Saturday.
If you use past tense and write "on Saturday," people will assume you mean the most recent Saturday.
TheMy destination was a mountain called Jiuyangping in the Fuyang dDistrict of Hangzhou City, called Jiuyangping.
The traffic was a little heavy and it was a little far from Shanghai, so it took us more than four hours to get there.
Nevertheless (Still), we all thought it was worth it because the azalea flowers in the mountain were so beautiful.
"Still" is more casual
It was a good time for them to bloom.
You can see them in this video: https://youtu.be/L2tZg-5_jkQ
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Glad you had a lovely hike!
April 24, 2024
Thank you so much！I learned a lot from your corrections and feedback.
The destination/ place I went to was a mountain in the Fuyang district of Hangzhou City, called Jiuyangping.
Some other way of writing. Don't think the comma is necessary here, though it could be left there I think.
The traffic was a little heavy and it was a littl/ there was quite a bit of traffic and it was a little/ relatively/ quite far from Shanghai, so it took us more than four hours to get there.
Nevertheless, we all thought it was worth it because the azalea flowers in the mountain were so beautiful.
It was a goodreally/ indeed a good/ great time for them to bloom.
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好久没改，最近比较忙。看见你每天在写，我真的 respect!
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