April 9, 2022
Spaniards #1
Keep in mind that Spaniards consider personal charm and first impression immensely important. The company is being judged through the prism of a representative. Thus, demeanor and appearance are no less significant than the quality of the product itself.
Clothing is related to this as it creates social status in the eyes of Spaniards, similarly to a house or a car. They have a liking for classic elegance without significant eccentricities. It is a matter of course for men to have a perfectly cut suit made of first-class fabric with clean shoes. Women show up mostly in classy costumes on official occasions. In the autumn and winter, they like to present their expensive fur coats. Perfect appearance means impeccable make-up and clothing, which is typical even for informal matters such as shopping for both men and women.
One has to be more conscientious than usual during packing their luggage. Negligent clothing can cast doubt on the firm's condition or one's position in the company.
The text is a translation of a part of a Czech article from the following link https://archiv.hn.cz/c1-18683090-spanele-hodne-daji-na-sarm-perfektni-vystupovani-a-odev, written in 2006.
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KeepIt's worth keeping in mind that Spaniards consider personal charm and first impressions immensely important.
It's worth keeping in mind that Spaniards consider personal charm and first impressions immensely important.
The company is being judged through the prism of aby their representative.
The company is being judged by their representative.
Thus, demeanor and appearance are no less significant than the quality of the product itself. Thus, demeanor and appearance are no less significant than the quality of the product itself.
This sentence is difficult to understand
Clothing is related to this as it creates social status in the eyes of Spaniards, similarly to a house or a car.
Clothing is related as it creates social status in the eyes of Spaniards, similar to a house or a car.
They have a liking for classic elegance without significant eccentricities.
They have a liking for classic elegance without eccentricities.
It is a matter of coursupmost importance for men to have a perfectly cut suit made of first-class fabric withand clean shoes.
It is a matter of upmost importance for men to have a perfectly cut suit made of first-class fabric and clean shoes.
Women show up mostly in classy costumesattire on official occasions.
Women show up mostly in classy attire on official occasions.
In the autumn and winter, they like to presentshow off their expensive fur coats.
In the autumn and winter, they like to show off their expensive fur coats.
Perfect appearance means impeccable make-up and clothing, which is typical even for informal matters such as shopping for both men and women.
One has to be more conscientious than usual duringwhen they packing their luggage.
One has to be more conscientious than usual when they pack their luggage.
NegligentPoor clothing can cast doubt on the firm's condition or one's position in the company.
Poor clothing can cast doubt on the firm's condition or one's position in the company.
April 10, 2022
It is a matter of coursupmost importance for men to have a perfectly cut suit made of first-class fabric withand clean shoes.
May I ask what is wrong with the expression "a matter of course"? I found that this was exactly the meaning I wanted to express.
April 10, 2022
NegligentPoor clothing can cast doubt on the firm's condition or one's position in the company.
I imagine the original message was that the clothes are crumbled from packing the luggage if one is not careful enough. Does this still qualify as "poor clothing"? Because that's why I said "negligent". Maybe "sloppy" could be an alternative. What do you think?
April 10, 2022
They have a liking for classic elegance without significant eccentricities.
Can we say if something is less or more eccentric? In the sentence above, I wanted to say "more eccentric". I am not sure how to express this.
April 10, 2022
Thank you so much for these corrections!
April 11, 2022
May I ask what is wrong with the expression "a matter of course"? I found that this was exactly the meaning I wanted to express.
Where did you find this phrase? It makes no sense to me here.
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Spaniards #1 |
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Keep in mind that Spaniards consider personal charm and first impression immensely important.
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The company is being judged through the prism of a representative.
The company is being judged |
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Thus, demeanor and appearance are no less significant than the quality of the product itself. Thus, demeanor and appearance are no less significant than the quality of the product itself. Thus, demeanor and appearance are no less significant than the quality of the product itself. This sentence is difficult to understand |
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Clothing is related to this as it creates social status in the eyes of Spaniards, similarly to a house or a car.
Clothing is related |
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They have a liking for classic elegance without significant eccentricities.
They have a liking for classic elegance without |
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It is a matter of course for men to have a perfectly cut suit made of first-class fabric with clean shoes.
It is a matter of |
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Women show up mostly in classy costumes on official occasions.
Women show up mostly in classy |
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In the autumn and winter, they like to present their expensive fur coats.
In the autumn and winter, they like to |
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Perfect appearance means impeccable make-up and clothing, which is typical even for informal matters such as shopping for both men and women. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One has to be more conscientious than usual during packing their luggage.
One has to be more conscientious than usual |
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Negligent clothing can cast doubt on the firm's condition or one's position in the company.
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