Getting I-ring perm of my hair permed Getting my hair permed

I tried looking it up, but I don't know what an I-ring perm is! This phrasing should be fine for all perm hairstyles though :)

Getting I-ring perm of my haira perm Getting a perm

I'm not sure what an I-ring perm is. And because a perm is a hairstyle, it's a bit repetitive to state that it's for your hair.

As I think of changing my hair to midely, I have to change my hair as well as my style. As I think of changing my hair to midely, I have to change my hair as well as my style.

"midely" - Do you mean mid-length?

As II'm think of changing my hair to midely, I have toing about changeing my hair as well as my style. I'm thinking about changing my hairstyle.

I'm not exactly sure what you meant with the sentence that you wrote. "Midely" is not an English word, so I'm not sure what you wanted to say. I simplified the sentence here to be direct about wanting a new hairstyle.

As I think of changing my hair to midely?_?, I have to change my hair as well as my style. As I think of changing my hair to ?_?, I have to change my hair as well as my style.

Midely isnt a word, not sure what you meant to put

When I woke up, I clicked themade a reservation button to make famous hair designer’s reservatiat a famous hair salon at athe time I want, by the girled, with the stylist I wanted. When I woke up, I made a reservation at a famous hair salon at the time I wanted, with the stylist I wanted.

We "make" a reservation.

When I woke up, I clicked themade a reservation button to makewith a famous hair designer’s reservation at a time I want, by the girl I want. When I woke up, I made a reservation with a famous hair designer.

Again, I simplified this a lot.

When I woke up, I clicked the reservation button to makebook an appointment with a famous hair designer’s reservation at a time I want, bywith the girl I want. When I woke up, I clicked the reservation button to book an appointment with a famous hair designer’s at a time I want, with the girl I want.

“Book an appointment” is the standard collocation

After making my reservation, I’m waitinged for several hours to get hair change to visit thero get my hair done. After making my reservation, I waited for several hours to go get my hair done.

We go somewhere in order to get our hair "done".

After making the reservation, I’m waitinged for several hours to get hair change to visit there. After making the reservation, I waited for several hours.

Hmm, not sure what you meant by the last part of this sentence either.

After reservation, I’mI waitinged for several hours to get hair change to visit therbefore going there to get my hair done. I waited for several hours before going there to get my hair done.

This is the idiomatic expression.

Before I make a chanwent to get my hair done, I had to havego to an English tutor class which held in her apartment for an hour with an English tutor who has thea certificate of English teaching, as tond a master ofs in English. It was held in her apartment for an hour. Before I went to get my hair done, I had to go to an English class with an English tutor who has a certificate of English teaching, and a masters in English. It was held in her apartment for an hour.

The context about the length of the class makes the original sentence too long.

Before I make a change my hair, I had to have amy hair appointment, I had an English tutor class with my tutor, which she held in her apartment for an hour with English tutor who has the certificate of English teaching, as to. My tutor has an English teaching certificate. She is a master of English. Before my hair appointment, I had an English class with my tutor, which she held in her apartment for an hour. My tutor has an English teaching certificate. She is a master of English.

Before I make a change my hair, I had to have an English tutoring class which was held in ther tutor's apartment and lasted for an hour with. The English tutor who has thea certificate ofin English teaching, as toto help us master of English. Before I make a change my hair, I had to have an English tutoring class which was held in the tutor's apartment and lasted for an hour. The English tutor has a certificate in English teaching, to help us master of English.

Breaking up the sentence makes the ideas much easier to follow.

In the class, I did explain by speaking English,in English, I talked about how I have watched the English listen class during going from office to homeing practice during my commute, and makwrote an officiprofessional letter to make change order to get approval byfrom a company. In the class, in English, I talked about how I have watched English listening practice during my commute, and wrote an professional letter to get approval from a company.

"going from office to home" --> "commute" I switched "official" to "professional" because it is a business letter, not a government letter.

In the class, I did explain by speakingspoke some English,. I have watched the English listen class during going from office to home and make an official letter to make change order to get approval by company.videos in English and listened in class. In the class, I spoke some English. I watched videos in English and listened in class.

Hmm, again the latter part of your sentence is confusing here. Not sure what you wanted to say, so I cut it out for a more concise description.

In the class, I did explain, by speaking English, I have watched the English listen class duringthat I had been listening to the English lessons while going from the office to home, and makethat I had written an official letter to makerequest a change order to get approval by my company. In the class, I did explain, by speaking English, that I had been listening to the English lessons while going from the office to home, and that I had written an official letter to request a change order to get approval by my company.

After I explaininged that, my teacher said I need to make a foreigner friends to makepractice my English skill more efficiently. After I explained that, my teacher said I need to make a foreigner friend to practice my English skill more efficiently.

After explaining that,My teacher said I need to make a foreigner friends to make English skill efficientlyfriends with foreigners to improve my English. My teacher said I need to make friends with foreigners to improve my English.

After explaining that, my teacher said that I need to make a foreigner friends to makein order to improve my English skills efficiently. After explaining that, my teacher said that I need to make foreign friends in order to improve my English skills efficiently.

I think it would be good to attend the regular foreigner’s gathering of people who really want to make a friends in bBusan, Seomyeon. I think it would be good to attend the regular foreigner’s gathering of people who really want to make a friends in Busan, Seomyeon.

I think it would be good to attend thea regular foreigner’s gathering who really want to make a friends in bBusan, Seomyeon. I think it would be good to attend a regular foreigner’s gathering to make friends in Busan, Seomyeon.

We capitalize the names of cities and other proper nouns.

I’m gonna attend the meeting to make friends, and get betterimprove my English skills. I’m gonna attend the meeting to make friends, and improve my English skills.

"gonna" is very informal, but not wrong. You could use "I will" instead.

I’m gonnaing to attend the meeting to make friends and get betterimprove my English skills. I’m going to attend the meeting to make friends and improve my English skills.

"Gonna" is slang basically. In formal writing, you should always write out "going to"

I’m gonna attend the meeting to make friends and get better myin English skills. I’m gonna attend the meeting to make friends and get better in English skills.