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A Video Captured While Cycling

My old friends on this website may know that I enjoy cycling along the Huangpu River on weekends when I don't have hiking plans that week.

That was what I did last Saturday.

Along the trail, many trees became beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos with random shots while riding my bike. Although I'm good at cycling, the videos were a little messy. After all, they were just a byproduct of my cycling.

I'd been hesitating whether or not to show you the video after I edited it. The view was way more beautiful than the video. Then I thought, after watching this video, maybe you could have one more option when you visit Shanghai someday.

So, here it is: https://youtu.be/3IwKXrYrLDA

Let me know if you have any questions or advice.

Thanks in advance!

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A Video Captured While Cycling

My old friends on this website may know that I enjoy cycling along the Huangpu River on weekends when I don't have hiking plans that week.

That was what I did last Saturday.

Although I'm good at cycling, the videos were a little messy.

I'd been hesitating whether or not to show you the video after I edited it.

The view was way more beautiful than the video.

So, here it is: https://youtu.be/3IwKXrYrLDA Let me know if you have any questions or advice.

Thanks in advance!

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A Video Captured While Cycling

That was what I did last Saturday.

Although I'm good at cycling, the videos were a little messy.

I'd been hesitating whether or not to show you the video after I edited it.

Then I thought, after watching this video, maybe you could have one more option when you visit Shanghai someday.

So, here it is: https://youtu.be/3IwKXrYrLDA Let me know if you have any questions or advice.

Thanks in advance!

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Tammy

Dec. 27, 2024

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That was what I did last Saturday.

Along the trail, many trees became beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos with random shots while riding my bike.

Although I'm good at cycling, the videos were a little messy.

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Tammy

Dec. 27, 2024

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A Video Captured While Cycling


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My old friends on this website may know that I enjoy cycling along the Huangpu River on weekends when I don't have hiking plans that week.


My oldlong-time friends on this website may know that I enjoy cycling along the Huangpu River on weekends when I don't havethere are no hiking plans that week. My long-time friends on this website may know that I enjoy cycling along the Huangpu River on weekends when there are no hiking plans that week.

My old friends on this website may know that I enjoy cycling along the Huangpu River on weekends when I don't have hiking plans (that week). My old friends on this website may know that I enjoy cycling along the Huangpu River on weekends when I don't have hiking plans (that week).

If you’d had hiking plans, wouldn’t they have been for the weekend, too? If so, you can omit “that week.”

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That was what I did last Saturday.


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Along the trail, many trees became beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos with random shots while riding my bike.


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Along the trail, many trees had becaome (or: turned) beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos with random shots (more natural: I shot some random video clips) while riding my bike. Along the trail, many trees had become (or: turned) beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos with random shots (more natural: I shot some random video clips) while riding my bike.

Along the trail, many trees becamwere beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos with random shots while riding my bike. Along the trail, many trees were beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos with random shots while riding my bike.

Thanks in advance!


Thanks in advance for your comments or corrections! Thanks in advance for your comments or corrections!

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Although I'm good at cycling, the videos were a little messy.


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After all, they were just a byproduct of my cycling.


MY GUESS: After all, they were just a byproduct of my filmed while cycling. MY GUESS: After all, they filmed while cycling.

After all, they were just a byproduct of my cycling. After all, they were just a byproduct of my cycling.

Sorry, I don’t fully understand the byproduct analogy. Are you saying “My goal was to enjoy cycling, so I didn’t put a lot of effort into the videos”? Or maybe “Taking videos wasn’t the main purpose of my outing”?

I'd been hesitating whether or not to show you the video after I edited it.


I'd been hesitating whether or not to show you the video after I editeding it. I'd been hesitating whether or not to show you the video after I editing it.

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The view was way more beautiful than the video.


The view was way more beautiful than it appears the video. The view was way more beautiful than it appears the video.

The view was way more beautiful than(in person) than (in) the video. The view was way more beautiful (in person) than (in) the video.

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Then I thought, after watching this video, maybe you could have one more option when you visit Shanghai someday.


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Then I thought, after watching this video, maybe you could have one more optionplace to visit when you visit Shanghai someday. Then I thought, after watching this video, maybe you could have one more place to visit when you visit Shanghai someday.

So, here it is: https://youtu.be/3IwKXrYrLDA Let me know if you have any questions or advice.


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Along the trail, many trees became beautiful and colorful, so I took some videos while riding my bike.


After all, they were just a byproduct of my riding.


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