Aug. 6, 2025
Avocado
I bought two avocados last night and planned to make breakfast this morning. I ordered them on a takeaway platform from a big supermarket, which I trusted very much.
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was worse than before. They were fully ripe but somewhat firm, lacking the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
昨晚我买了两个牛油果，准备今早做早餐用。我是在外卖平台上一家大型超市订购的，我非常信任那个超市。
然而，今天早上我打开包装盒时发现，这些牛油果的质量比以前差多了。它们虽已完全成熟，但有些硬邦邦，没有那种柔软、细腻的黄油质感。
我有点失望，下次打算去我们小区的线下水果店买了。
Avocado
I bought two avocados last night and planned to make breakfast this morning.
I ordered them on a takeaway platform from a big supermarket, which that I trusted very much.
What do you mean by takeaway platform? A conveyer belt, online pickup, etc.?
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was worse than before.
They were fully ripe but somewhat firm, lacking the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
There are a few ways to indicate a store that’s not online. You can say “physical store,” “brick and mortar store,” or “buy in person.”
Avocado
I bought two avocados last night andwith which I planned to make breakfast this morning.
I ordered them on a takeaway platformit online from a big supermarket, which I trusted very much.
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was worse than beforebad.
They were fully ripe but somewhat firm, and lacking the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided to buy avocados from the offline fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
Aug. 6, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Avocado
I bought two avocados last night and planned to make breakfast with them this morning.
I ordered them on a takeaway platform from a big supermarket, which I trusted very much.
However, when I opened the box this morning, I found that the quality of the avocados was much worse than before.
TAlthough they were fully ripe but, they somewhat firm, and lackinged the soft, creamy texture of butter.
I'm a little disappointed and decided. I plan to buy avocados from the offlinephysical fruit store in our neighborhood next time.
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The English was all fine! I just edited it to be a bit closer to the Chinese
Aug. 6, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
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