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milapila2706

March 6, 2024

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I'm an introvert. I tend to avoid social events. Even more, I prefer to be alone doing some hobby than going to a party full of people I know. It's not that I dislike the people around me, I just don't like social interactions that much. In the past, I felt very guilty for this. I was very shy and I felt very alone, because I didn't have any friends. That's why I started to hang out with some people, but they weren't really my friends. I just wanted to be around other people so I don't feel weird. Now, I'm over that phase and I truly enjoy being alone.

However, some problem I'm dealing with now is eye contact. I tend to avoid it. Even when talking it can very difficult for me to look at the speaker. Also, I realize that I have a very serious face sometimes and I think that makes people uncomfortable when being with me. That's why I try to not make that judging face and just relax.

I'm well aware that it's really important to have well developed social skills to live a better life. That's what I'm focusing now. I want people to hear me loud and clear and not misunderstand what I say. And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or if they rejected me. The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people minds and I start to overthink about how I have to act in front of them, an habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all.

Thanks for reading!

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Eye contact

I'm an introvert.

It's not that I dislike the people around me, I just don't like social interactions that much.

I was very shy and I felt very alone, because I didn't have any friends.

That's why I started to hang out with some people, but they weren't really my friends.

I just wanted to be around other people so I don't feel weird.

Now, I'm over that phase and I truly enjoy being alone.

I tend to avoid it.

Even when talking it can very difficult for me to look at the speaker.

Also, I realize that I have a very serious face sometimes and I think that makes people uncomfortable when being with me.

That's why I try to not make that judging face and just relax.

I'm well aware that it's really important to have well developed social skills to live a better life.

I want people to hear me loud and clear and not misunderstand what I say.

The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people minds and I start to overthink about how I have to act in front of them, an habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all.

Thanks for reading!

I'm an introvert.

I tend to avoid social events.

Even more, I prefer to be alone doing some hobby than going to a party full of people I know.

It's not that I dislike the people around me, I just don't like social interactions that much.

That's why I started to hang out with some people, but they weren't really my friends.

Now, I'm over that phase and I truly enjoy being alone.

I tend to avoid it.

Also, I realize that I have a very serious face sometimes and I think that makes people uncomfortable when being with me.

I'm well aware that it's really important to have well developed social skills to live a better life.

I want people to hear me loud and clear and not misunderstand what I say.

Thanks for reading!

I'm an introvert.

I tend to avoid social events.

It's not that I dislike the people around me, I just don't like social interactions that much.

I was very shy and I felt very alone, because I didn't have any friends.

Now, I'm over that phase and I truly enjoy being alone.

I tend to avoid it.

Even when talking it can very difficult for me to look at the speaker.

That's why I try to not make that judging face and just relax.

I'm well aware that it's really important to have well developed social skills to live a better life.

I want people to hear me loud and clear and not misunderstand what I say.

Thanks for reading!

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I'm an introvert.


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I tend to avoid social events.


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Even more, I prefer to be alone doing some hobby than going to a party full of people I know.


Even more, I prefer to be alone doing some hobby thanover going to a party full of people I know. Even more, I prefer to be alone doing some hobby over going to a party full of people I know.

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Even more, I prefer to be alone doing somea hobby than going to a party full of people I know. Even more, I prefer to be alone doing a hobby than going to a party full of people I know.

I would combine this sentence with the previous to sound more natural: "I tend to avoid social events and I prefer to be alone doing a hobby than going to a party full of people I know."

Even more, I prefer to be alone doing some hobby rather than going to a party full of people I know. I prefer to be alone doing some hobby rather than going to a party full of people I know.

It's not that I dislike the people around me, I just don't like social interactions that much.


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In the past, I felt very guilty for this.


In the past, I felt very guilty for / about this. In the past, I felt very guilty for / about this.

“About” sounds more natural to me, but I’m not sure “for” is wrong.

In the past, I feltused to feel very guilty forabout this. In the past, I used to feel very guilty about this.

In the past, I have felt very guilty for this. In the past, I have felt very guilty for this.

I was very shy and I felt very alone, because I didn't have any friends.


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I was very shy and I felt very alone, because I didn't have any friends. I was very shy and I felt very alone because I didn't have any friends.

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That's why I started to hang out with some people, but they weren't really my friends.


That's why I started to hang out with some people, but / even though they weren't really my friends. That's why I started to hang out with some people, but / even though they weren't really my friends.

Something about “but” in this sentence doesn’t feel right to me.

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I just wanted to be around other people so I don't feel weird.


I just wanted to be around other people so I wouldon't feel weird. I just wanted to be around other people so I wouldn't feel weird.

I just wanted to be around other people so I wouldon't feel weird. I just wanted to be around other people so I wouldn't feel weird.

I just wanted to be around other people so that I doidn't feel weird. I just wanted to be around other people so that I didn't feel weird.

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Now, I'm over that phase and I truly enjoy being alone.


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However, some problem I'm dealing with now is eye contact.


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However, somthe problem I'm dealing with now is eye contact. However, the problem I'm dealing with now is eye contact.

However, somthe problem I'm dealing with now is making eye contact. However, the problem I'm dealing with now is making eye contact.

I tend to avoid it.


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I'm well aware that it's really important to have well developed social skills to live a better life.


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That's what I'm focusing now.


That's what I'm focusing on now. That's what I'm focusing on now.

That's what I'm focusing on now. That's what I'm focusing on now.

That's what I'm focusing on now. That's what I'm focusing on now.

That's what I'm on focusing now. That's what I'm on focusing now.

I want people to hear me loud and clear and not misunderstand what I say.


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And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or if they rejected me.


And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or if they rejected me. And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or if they reject me.

And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or if thewhether they may rejected me. And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or whether they may reject me.

And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or if theypeople rejected me. And not only that, I want to be myself without being afraid of how people look at me or if people reject me.

The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people minds and I start to overthink about how I have to act in front of them, an habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all.


The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people minds and I start to overthink (about) how I have to act in front of them, an habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all. The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people minds and I start to overthink (about) how I have to act in front of them, a habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all.

I would omit “about.”

The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people minds and I start to overthink about how I have to act in front of them, an habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all. The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people minds and I start to overthink about how I have to act in front of them, a habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all.

The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people's minds and I start to overthink about how I have to act in front of them, an. That's a habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all. The bad part is that when I walk into a room I somehow can read people's minds and I start to overthink about how I have to act in front of them. That's a habit that I'm trying to stop once and for all.

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Thanks for reading!


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Even when talking it can very difficult for me to look at the speaker.


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Even when talking it can very difficult for me to look at the speakmy conversation partner. Even when talking it can very difficult for me to look at my conversation partner.

Even when talking, it can be very difficult for me to look at the speaker. Even when talking, it can be very difficult for me to look at the speaker.

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Also, I realize that I have a very serious face sometimes and I think that makes people uncomfortable when being with me.


Also, I realize that I have a very serious face sometimes and I think that makes people uncomfortable [when being with me | around me]. Also, I realize that I have a very serious face sometimes and I think that makes people uncomfortable [when being with me | around me].

There’s nothing wrong with your original wording, I’m just offering an idiomatic alternative.

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Also, I realizeknow that I have a very serious face sometimes, and I think that makes people uncomfortable when beingthey're with me. Also, I know that I have a very serious face sometimes, and I think that makes people uncomfortable when they're with me.

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That's why I try to not make that judging face and just relax.


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That's why I try to not make thata judgingmental face and just relax. That's why I try to not make a judgmental face and just relax.

That's why I try to not make that judgingserious face and just relax. That's why I try to not make that serious face and just relax.

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