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March 28, 2023

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Avengers: Endgame

I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!
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Avengers: Endgame


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Let's work together, everyone.


Ratings
8.5 /10

Review

It was a very good movie, but I would like to say to Thanos. I guess that if there were stones that could teleport, change matter into something else, and rewind time, the problems Thanos said would have been manageable, I guess so he should have made better use of those stones and properly discussed and cooperated with the Avengers. Then fewer people would have died. I learned the importance of cooperation. But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

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Avengers: Endgame

I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

Avengers: Endgame

Summary Comments

Let's work together, everyone.

Ratings

8.5 /10

Review

It was a very good movie, but I would like to say something to Thanos.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess.

I guess that if there were stones that gems could be teleport, change mattered, matter changed into something else, and rewind timetime could be rewound, the problems Thanos saidmade would have been manageable,. I guess so he should have made better use of those stonegems and properly discussed them and cooperated with the Avengers.

Then fewer people would have died.

I learned the importance of cooperation.

But I do want to see the world after thea population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

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面白そうです。よく出来ました!

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sho

March 31, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️

Avengers: Endgame

I'd like to speak English naturally, and idiomatically, not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I cany sentences to help me speak like a native!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

Avengers: Endgame

Summary Comments

Let's work together, everyone.

Ratings

8.5 /10

Review

It was a very good movie, but I would like to say to Thanos.

I am not sure who or what Thanos is so you should explain that here.

I guess that if there were stones that could teleport, change matter into something else, and rewind time, the problems Thanos said would have been manageable, I guess so. I think he should have made better use of those stones and properly discussed it in more detail and cooperated with the Avengers.

Then fewerless people would have died.

I learned the importance of cooperation.

But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

You don’t normally start a sentence with but

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sho

March 29, 2023

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But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

I've learned a lot!! Thank you so much!!

Avengers: Endgame

Let's work together, everyone.

Ratings

8.5 /10

Review

It was a very good movie, but I would like to say something abouto Thanos.

I guess that if there were stones that could teleport, change matter into something else, and rewind time, the problems Thanos said would have been manageable, I guess so he should have made better use of those stones and properly discussed and cooperated with the Avengers.

I learned the importance of cooperation.

But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

Feedback

Great work! Personally, I liked Avengers: Endgame more and would probably rate it a 9/10. I watched it in the theater the second week after it came out. It felt much more like a crucial event you were witnessing rather than just a normal movie.

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sho

March 29, 2023

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Yes! It was exciting for sure! It was a good movie!
Thank you for the corrections anyway!!

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Avengers: Endgame


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I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!


I'd like to speak English naturally, and idiomatically, not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I cany sentences to help me speak like a native!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Avengers: Endgame


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let's work together, everyone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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8.5 /10


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Review


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a very good movie, but I would like to say to Thanos.


It was a very good movie, but I would like to say something abouto Thanos.

It was a very good movie, but I would like to say to Thanos.

I am not sure who or what Thanos is so you should explain that here.

It was a very good movie, but I would like to say something to Thanos.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess.

I guess that if there were stones that could teleport, change matter into something else, and rewind time, the problems Thanos said would have been manageable, I guess so he should have made better use of those stones and properly discussed and cooperated with the Avengers.


I guess that if there were stones that could teleport, change matter into something else, and rewind time, the problems Thanos said would have been manageable, I guess so he should have made better use of those stones and properly discussed and cooperated with the Avengers.

I guess that if there were stones that could teleport, change matter into something else, and rewind time, the problems Thanos said would have been manageable, I guess so. I think he should have made better use of those stones and properly discussed it in more detail and cooperated with the Avengers.

I guess that if there were stones that gems could be teleport, change mattered, matter changed into something else, and rewind timetime could be rewound, the problems Thanos saidmade would have been manageable,. I guess so he should have made better use of those stonegems and properly discussed them and cooperated with the Avengers.

Then fewer people would have died.


Then fewerless people would have died.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I learned the importance of cooperation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.


But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

You don’t normally start a sentence with but

But I do want to see the world after thea population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.

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