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Autumn
Autumn seems came all of sudden. It came quietly and secretly in some night. Every time when autumn came, this old Chinese poem always pops up in my mind. --''自古逢秋悲寂寥'', which means people always feel sad and lonely when autumn came. Is it only Chinese people will be like that? Will Japanese people suddenly think of some haiku, too? Will people from English speaking countries think of some poem, too?
秋天好像突然就来了。在某个夜里悄悄地来了。每到秋天我脑海里总是会突然冒出这句古诗——“自古逢秋悲寂寥”。只有中国人会这样吗？日本人也会突然想起某个俳句吗？英文国家的人会想起某句诗歌吗？
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WillDo Japanese people suddenly think of some haiku, too?
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It came quietly and secretly in somone night.
Every time when autumn caomes, this old Chinese poem always pops up in my mind. --'': "自古逢秋悲寂寥,'', which means people always feel sad and lonely when autumn caomes.
Is it only Chinese people will beho feel like that?
We're talking about emotions (sad, lonely), so the word "feel" is appropriate
Will Japanese people suddenly think of somecertain haiku, too?
Thinking of specific haiku = certain haiku
I have seen "haiku" written both with and without an S in the plural sense, so I think either one is ok (it tends to be unclear for foreign words)
Will people from English -speaking countries think of somea particular poem, too?
Changed "some" to "particular" for the same reason as above
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A lot of people have strong feelings about autumn. I don't feel this personally, but it is common enough for Americans (usually women).
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Autumn
Autumn seems cato have come all of sudden.
It came quietly and secretly in somone night.
Every time when autumn caomes, this old Chinese poem always pops up into my mind. --''自古逢秋悲寂寥'', which means people always feel sad and lonely when autumn caomes.
Is it only Chinese people will bho are like that?
Will Japanese people suddenly think of some haiku, too?
Will people from English speaking countries think of some poem, too?
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