Dec. 12, 2023
Autumn
Autumn is generally perceived as a harvest season. To tell the truth, I don’t know what we are going to harvest. Crops? We plant wheat and rice two or three times a year. Vegetables and fruits? We have a variety of food during the four seasons.
However, leaves turning yellow and dropping to the ground is one of the main sights of this season. The streets in the city are topped with yellow leaves.
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Dec. 22, 2023
Thank you very much!
Autumn is generally perceived as a harvest season.
To tell the truth, I don’t know what we are going to harvest.
CMaybe crops?
Adding maybe makes it seem more like, you think they harvest crops, but you don't know for certain.
We plant wheat and rice two or three times a year.
VMaybe vegetables and fruits as well?
We have a variety of food during the fourthroughout the seasons.
Sounds more natural
However, leaves turning yellow and dropping to the ground is one of the main sights of this season.
The streets in the city are topped with yellow leaves.
This is correct, but "covered with yellow leaves" sounds a bit more natural.
Dec. 13, 2023
Thank you for your corrections!
However, lLeaves turning yellow and dropping to the ground is one of the main sights of this season.
"However" means a contradiction of your previous statement is about to follow. This sentence doesn't contradict anything, so you don't need "however."
Dec. 13, 2023
Thank you for your correction! :-)
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Autumn is generally perceived as a harvest season. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To tell the truth, I don’t know what we are going to harvest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Crops?
Adding maybe makes it seem more like, you think they harvest crops, but you don't know for certain. |
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We plant wheat and rice two or three times a year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Vegetables and fruits?
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We have a variety of food during the four seasons. We have a variety of food Sounds more natural We |
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However, leaves turning yellow and dropping to the ground is one of the main sights of this season. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"However" means a contradiction of your previous statement is about to follow. This sentence doesn't contradict anything, so you don't need "however."
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The streets in the city are topped with yellow leaves. The streets in the city are topped with yellow leaves. This is correct, but "covered with yellow leaves" sounds a bit more natural. |
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