Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

15
Autumn

Autumn here usually comes around the 7th of August every year, so it's been about one month since it came.

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keeps high. It only drops down until late September.

It's early September now. The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice at present. In the morning and evening, it's cool. In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's nice hot, not like the heat during summer.

In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds with it.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky in summer.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, that is September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold. For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season.

Life is beautiful. Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.

Corrections

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepstays high.

It onlydoesn't drops down until late September.

Or "It only drops down in late September."

The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice at presentnow.

"At present" works, but it sounds very formal.

In autumn, the sky looks very hlight and blue, i. It seems like it is just washed out, and there are always white clouds within it.

I'm not sure what you mean by high, but hopefully this works.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky inlike in the summer.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, t. That is from September, October and until the first part of November, because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this seasoautumn.

Feedback

Great work! Enjoy the beautiful weather :)

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

15

In autumn, the sky looks very hlight and blue, i. It seems like it is just washed out, and there are always white clouds within it.

If the sky is 100 feet from the ground in summer, then in autumn it looks 300 feet from the ground.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

15

Thank you very much

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepays high.

It only drops down untilaround late September.

“Until” here gives a feeling of it’s already cold and will rise again when it’s late September.

这句子听起来像“温度一直都是冷的,直到九月下旬它才会上升”。

It's early September now.

I would merge this with the sentence below.

这句子读起来有点儿尴尬。

TIt’s early September now and the temperature ranges from around 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is sovery nice at presentcurrently/at the moment/now.

这里的“So”也听起来有点尴尬。

In the afternoon (however), it's a little hot, but it's a nice hot, not (type of) heat, unlike the heat during the summer.

In autumns/During the autumn season, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is’s (it has) just been washed, and there are always white clouds within it.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky inlike in the summer.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, thatwhich is September, October and the first parthalf of November because it becomegets cold in the last partter half of November.

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold.

Feedback

我也很喜欢夏天,感觉满街五顏六色的叶子很浪漫。天气凉爽,什么样的衣服都能穿,哈哈。

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

15

谢谢你的修改。没想到你的中文那么好,真的好羡慕你。

RyZZY's avatar
RyZZY

Sept. 9, 2022

0

谢谢你的修改。没想到你的中文那么好,真的好羡慕你。

沒事!感恩,我从小到大在家裡都讲两门语言。

Autumn

It's early September now.

In the morning and evening, it's cool.

Life is beautiful.

Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

15

Thank you very much

Autumn

Autumn here usually comes around the 7th of August every year, so it's been about one month since it came.

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepays high.

It only drops (down until) in late September.

It's early September now.

The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice (at present/currently).

In the morning and evening, it's cool.

In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's a nice hoeat, not like the heat during summer.

In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds within it.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky in summer.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, that isin September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold.

FAs for me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season.

Life is beautiful.

Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.

Feedback

I am also looking forward to cooler temperatures! Our autumn is just starting so it is still hot, even at night.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

15

Thank you very much. I hope the weather over there becomes cooler soon, so you can enjoy it in advance.

Autumn


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Autumn here usually comes around the 7th of August every year, so it's been about one month since it came.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keeps high.


For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepays high.

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepays high.

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepstays high.

It only drops down until late September.


It only drops (down until) in late September.

It only drops down untilaround late September.

“Until” here gives a feeling of it’s already cold and will rise again when it’s late September. 这句子听起来像“温度一直都是冷的,直到九月下旬它才会上升”。

It onlydoesn't drops down until late September.

Or "It only drops down in late September."

It's early September now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's early September now.

I would merge this with the sentence below. 这句子读起来有点儿尴尬。

The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice at present.


The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice (at present/currently).

TIt’s early September now and the temperature ranges from around 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is sovery nice at presentcurrently/at the moment/now.

这里的“So”也听起来有点尴尬。

The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice at presentnow.

"At present" works, but it sounds very formal.

In the morning and evening, it's cool.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's nice hot, not like the heat during summer.


In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's a nice hoeat, not like the heat during summer.

In the afternoon (however), it's a little hot, but it's a nice hot, not (type of) heat, unlike the heat during the summer.

In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds with it.


In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds within it.

In autumns/During the autumn season, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is’s (it has) just been washed, and there are always white clouds within it.

In autumn, the sky looks very hlight and blue, i. It seems like it is just washed out, and there are always white clouds within it.

I'm not sure what you mean by high, but hopefully this works.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky in summer.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky inlike in the summer.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky inlike in the summer.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, that is September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November.


I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, that isin September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, thatwhich is September, October and the first parthalf of November because it becomegets cold in the last partter half of November.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, t. That is from September, October and until the first part of November, because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold.

For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season.


FAs for me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season.

For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this seasoautumn.

Life is beautiful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium