Dec. 21, 2019
autism
Recently, I've been reading a blog about autism. It's written by a mother who has an autistic son. I happened to find it when I was searching clothes for my grandfather online. I learn many things from it. Sometimes, it's painful to think in her position. I hope she would feel calm.
自閉症
最近自閉症に関するブログを読んでいます。自閉症の息子を持つ母親によって書かれたものです。ネットで孫娘の洋服を探していて偶然見つけました。このブログから沢山のことを学んでいます。母親の立場になると時には辛い気持ちになります。彼女が穏やかに過ごせますように。
Recently, I've been reading a blog about autism. recently.
Flows better with recently at the end of the sentence!
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Just correcting one sentence
Dec. 21, 2019
Tank you so much.
aAutism
Recently, I've been reading a blog about autism.
It's written by a mother who has an autistic son.
I happened to find it when I was searching clothes for my grandfathdaughter online.
"I happened to find it" is correct. Another option: "I stumbled across it'
I've learnt many things from it.
Sometimes, it's painful to think inabout her position.
Or: "Sometimes, it's painful to think about what it would be like to be in her position."
I hope she would feel calmwish her the best.
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It can be really challenging to have a child with special needs. I'm sure the child's mom is very strong, especially if she is sharing her story online.
Dec. 22, 2019
Thank you so much.
Dec. 22, 2019
You're welcome!
Dec. 24, 2019
Thank you for following me.I'm sorry I don't know how to follow you and I've entered a trash can's mark.
Dec. 25, 2019
If you click on my name, my profile will load. Then, on the right, there should be a button that says "Add Friend." If you click that, you will follow me. There's no pressure of course!
aAutism
RecentLately, I've been reading a blog about autism.
It's written by a mother who has an autistic son.
I happened to find it when I was searching for clothes for my grandfather online.
I learned many things from it.
Sometimes, it's painful to think about what it would be like in her position.
I hope she would feel calm.
Dec. 21, 2019
Thank you so much.
autism
Recently, I've been reading a blog abouton autism.
It's written by a mother who has an autistic son.
I happened to find it when I was searching clothes for my grandfath-daughter online.
Your native text said grand-daughter, so I guess it was written by mistake here.
I learned many things from it.
Sometimes, iIt's painful to think inabout her position, sometimes.
"It's painful to think, what she must be going through" would be a more natural way to say it in person. There is nothing unnatural about your sentence though.
I hope she would feel calmis able to find some peace.
Dec. 21, 2019
Thank you so much.
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Sometimes, it's painful to think in her position.
"It's painful to think, what she must be going through" would be a more natural way to say it in person. There is nothing unnatural about your sentence though. Sometimes, it's painful to think about what it would be like in her position. Sometimes, it's painful to think Or: "Sometimes, it's painful to think about what it would be like to be in her position." |
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