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moumounorinori

Jan. 30, 2024

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Australia 5

We had to got Sydney airport around 5 :00pm.

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

My Australian friend and his wife came to the airport to see us off.

I said "See you next time" to them.

We enjoyed Australian lifestyle.
I appreciate their hospitality.
I would love they (My Australian friend and his wife)come to Japan next time.

When a airplane took off, I could see a night view from a window which was so beautiful.

I had so many great experiences! Thank you all.

The end.


オーストラリア旅行の続きです。

私達はシドニー空港に5時に行かなければなりません。なぜなら飛行機の出発時間は夜10時だからです。

オーストラリアの友達と奥さんが見送りにきてくれました。

私は"今度は日本に来てください"と言いました。

飛行機が離陸した時、夜景が見えました。とてもきれいでした。

本当に素晴らしい経験が出来ました。みなさんありがとうございました。

オーストラリアの旅行の話はこれで終わりです。

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Australia 5

We had to get tot Sydney airport around 5:00pm.

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

My Australian friend and his wife came to the airport to see us off.

I said "Ssee you next time" to them.

We enjoyed the Australian lifestyle.

I appreciated their hospitality.

I would love if they (Mmy Australian friend and his wife)coame to Japan next time.

When athe airplane took off, I could see athe night view from amy window which was so beautiful.

I had so many great experiences!

Thank you all.!

The end.

Australia 5

We had to got to the Sydney airport around 5 :00pm.

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

My Australian friend and his wife came to the airport to see us off.

I said "See you next time" to them.

We enjoyed Australian lifestyle.

I appreciate their hospitality.

I would love if they (My Australian friend and his wife)coame to Japan next time.

When athe airplane took off, I could see athe night view from athe window which was so beautiful.

"a" refers to "any" object such as another airplane, "the" refers to a direct object like the airplane you were on!

I had so many great experiences!

Thank you all.

The end.

We had to gotet to the Sydney airport around 5:00pm.

Use “get” instead of got. Since you are specifying the Sydney airport, use the definitive article “the” in front.

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

My Australian friend and his wife came to the airport to see us off.

I said "See you next time" to them.

We enjoyed Australian lifestyle.

I appreciate their hospitality.

I would love for theym (My Australian friend and his wife) to come to Japan next time.

Use “them” since your friend and his wife are the object of your statement. Add “to” before “come” since you want for them to do something

When athe airplane took off, I could see a night view from a window which was so beautiful.

Use “the” since you are describing a specific airplane

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

Usually when a sentence begins with a conjunction like "because," it's better to merge it with the previous sentence.

I appreciated their hospitality.

Same as "enjoyed" in the previous sentence, "appreciated" should be in past-tense since you're leaving and won't be receiving their hospitality for a while.

I would love for theym (Mmy Australian friend and his wife) to come to Japan next time.

When a airthe plane took off, I could see a night view from athe window which. It was so beautiful.

"the" are used here because we already know you're on a plane and the plane has windows. Thus, *the* plane you're on, and *the* window you're sitting next to.

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Ahh, it sounds like you had a wonderful trip!

Australia 5

We had to get tot Sydney airport around 5:00pm.

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

5 hours early?!

My Australian friend and his wife came to the airport to see us off.

I said "Ssee you next time" to them.

We enjoyed the Australian lifestyle.

I appreciated their hospitality.

To match the tense of the previous sentence

I would love if they (Mmy Australian friend and his wife)co came to Japan next time.

When athe airplane took off, I could see a night view from a window which was so beautiful.

It should be an instead of a because airplane starts with a vowel.
However, in this case, it is the airplane because it is the particular plane that you are on.

I had so many great experiences!

Thank you all.

The end.

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Nice job!

Australia 5

We had to goet Sydney airport around 5 :00pm.

I see why you would have put “got”, but the correct usage for this particular phrase in this context, “we had to get/go/arrive” is “get”: as a general rule, if there is an obligation/imperative “we had to…” use get. “She had to get ready by 5PM.” “I had to get there before 5PM.” “They had to get there at 6.”

Because our departure time was 10:0:00pm/10pm.

My Australian friend and his wife came to the airport to see us off.

I said "See you next time" to them.

We enjoyed the Australian lifestyle.

We enjoyed + the (article) + noun. “We enjoyed the show.” “We enjoyed the series.” “We enjoyed the feast.”

I appreciated their hospitality.

Talking in the past tense as you’ve now left, and the actions of hospitality are in the past. Therefore you must use the past tense here.

I would love for theym (Mmy Australian friend and his wife) to come to Japan next time.

Grammar

When athe airplane took off, I could see a night view from aview of the city at night through the window, which was so beautiful.

“When the music stopped…” “When the bus left…” “When the plane took off…”

I had so many great experiences!

Thank you all.

The end.

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Lovely work.

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moumounorinori

Jan. 30, 2024

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Thank you very much.

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We had to got Sydney airport around 5 :00pm.


We had to goet Sydney airport around 5 :00pm.

I see why you would have put “got”, but the correct usage for this particular phrase in this context, “we had to get/go/arrive” is “get”: as a general rule, if there is an obligation/imperative “we had to…” use get. “She had to get ready by 5PM.” “I had to get there before 5PM.” “They had to get there at 6.”

We had to get tot Sydney airport around 5:00pm.

We had to gotet to the Sydney airport around 5:00pm.

Use “get” instead of got. Since you are specifying the Sydney airport, use the definitive article “the” in front.

We had to got to the Sydney airport around 5 :00pm.

We had to get tot Sydney airport around 5:00pm.

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.


Because our departure time was 10:0:00pm/10pm.

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

5 hours early?!

Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

Usually when a sentence begins with a conjunction like "because," it's better to merge it with the previous sentence.

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Because our departure time was 10:00pm.

My Australian friend and his wife came to the airport to see us off.


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I said "See you next time" to them.


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I said "Ssee you next time" to them.

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I said "Ssee you next time" to them.

We enjoyed Australian lifestyle.


We enjoyed the Australian lifestyle.

We enjoyed + the (article) + noun. “We enjoyed the show.” “We enjoyed the series.” “We enjoyed the feast.”

We enjoyed the Australian lifestyle.

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We enjoyed the Australian lifestyle.

I appreciate their hospitality.


I appreciated their hospitality.

Talking in the past tense as you’ve now left, and the actions of hospitality are in the past. Therefore you must use the past tense here.

I appreciated their hospitality.

To match the tense of the previous sentence

I appreciated their hospitality.

Same as "enjoyed" in the previous sentence, "appreciated" should be in past-tense since you're leaving and won't be receiving their hospitality for a while.

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I appreciated their hospitality.

I would love they (My Australian friend and his wife)come to Japan next time.


I would love for theym (Mmy Australian friend and his wife) to come to Japan next time.

Grammar

I would love if they (Mmy Australian friend and his wife)co came to Japan next time.

I would love for theym (Mmy Australian friend and his wife) to come to Japan next time.

I would love for theym (My Australian friend and his wife) to come to Japan next time.

Use “them” since your friend and his wife are the object of your statement. Add “to” before “come” since you want for them to do something

I would love if they (My Australian friend and his wife)coame to Japan next time.

I would love if they (Mmy Australian friend and his wife)coame to Japan next time.

When a airplane took off, I could see a night view from a window which was so beautiful.


When athe airplane took off, I could see a night view from aview of the city at night through the window, which was so beautiful.

“When the music stopped…” “When the bus left…” “When the plane took off…”

When athe airplane took off, I could see a night view from a window which was so beautiful.

It should be an instead of a because airplane starts with a vowel. However, in this case, it is the airplane because it is the particular plane that you are on.

When a airthe plane took off, I could see a night view from athe window which. It was so beautiful.

"the" are used here because we already know you're on a plane and the plane has windows. Thus, *the* plane you're on, and *the* window you're sitting next to.

When athe airplane took off, I could see a night view from a window which was so beautiful.

Use “the” since you are describing a specific airplane

When athe airplane took off, I could see athe night view from athe window which was so beautiful.

"a" refers to "any" object such as another airplane, "the" refers to a direct object like the airplane you were on!

When athe airplane took off, I could see athe night view from amy window which was so beautiful.

I had so many great experiences!


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Thank you all.


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Thank you all.!

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