Jan. 29, 2024
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I'm going to talk about the continuation of my trip in Australia.
The last day of my travel Australia, I went to Manly beach by ferry boat.
I've been the beach ones so the scenery is looked familiar.
We got on a ferry boat from a wharf.
We could see Opera house and harbor bridge. A view from a ferry boat was amazing. So I love Sydney.
It was superb view!
It took around 30minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry boat.
We walked along the beach and we ate fish and chips. That was soooo delicious. I couldn't eat all so I feed it sea gull.
オーストラリア旅行の続きです。
旅行の最後の日は、シドニーのマンリービーチに行きました。以前にそのビーチに行ったことがあるので、とても懐かしかったです。
マンリービーチまでフェリーで行きました。
ハーバーブリッジやオペラハウスが見えました。素敵な眺めでした。フェリーからの眺めは最高でした。
30分間フェリーに乗りました。
海岸沿いを歩いてからフィッシュ&チップスを食べました。美味しかったです。
全部食べきれなかったのでカモメにあげました。
Australia 3
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TOn the last day of my travel Australia, I went to Manly beach by ferry boat.the trip I took a ferry to Manly beach.
I've been to the beach once befores so the scenery is looked familiar.
We got on a ferry boat from a wharf.
We could see the Opera house and hHarbour bridge.
AThe view from athe ferry boat was amazing.
So I love Sydney.!
It was a superb view!
It took around 30 minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry boat.
We walked along the beach and we ate fish and chips.
That was soooo delicious.
I couldn't eat it all so I feed it to the sea gull.s.
Australia 3
I'm going to talk about the continuationnext leg of my trip in Australia.
Each part of a journey is called a leg. You could also just say "I'm going to talk about the next part of my Australia trip".
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I've been to the beach once befores so the scenery is looked familiar.
We got on a ferry boat from a wharf.
We could see the Opera house and harbor bridge.
AThe view from athe ferry boat was amazing.
It was a superb view!
It took around 30minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry boat.
You can say "by ferry" or "by boat". Saying "by ferry boat" sounds strange.
We walked along the beach and we ate fish and chips.
I couldn't eat it all so I feed it to the sea gulls.
Or "I couldn't finish it".
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Thate meal was soooo delicious.
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TOn the last day of my travel to Australia, I went to Manly bBeach by ferry boat.
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We got ontook a ferry boat from athe wharf.
We could see Sydney Opera hHouse and hHarbor bBridge.
AThe view from athe ferry boat was amazing.
SoFor this reason, I love Sydney.
It was superb view!
It took around 30 minutes (to get) from the wharf to Manly wWharf by ferry boat.
I put "to get" in parentheses because it sounds more natural but is not wrong without it.
I couldn't eat it all so I feed it to a sea gull.
Lucky seagull! : )
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This was well written. Sounds like a beautiful trip. I especially liked the part where you fed your lunch to the seagull.
Jan. 29, 2024
Thank you for corrections.😊
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Thank you for sharing your travel experiences with us! I was never interested in going to Australia before reading your post, but now I want to go and see the Opera House too.
Jan. 29, 2024
Thank you for corrections!
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