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Nov. 5, 2022

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a normal week

Hi ! My name is Isa, i'm a law student. I'm currently studying in a my second year of master degree in the university of Strasbourg, France.

Normally, a week kind of looks like that :

I like to wake up early in the morning, maybe around 6 or 7 o'clock. Then i take a coffee, and take a great time for myself, enjoying to learn either italian, german or russian on my computer.

After that, i eat my breakfast and then i go to the gym for 1h30 or something like that.

I feel so good after having done my exercise !

Then, i come back home, take a shower and begin to study... That's not the best moment of the day but it's something I have to do !

I also go to the university... I don't have a lot of classes during the week, so i am there maybe 2 or 3 hours per day.

The tuesday, i go to my cubain salsa class and i really like that ! That's so much fun !!

I also give 10 or 15 hours french classes to foreign students on a platform called "preply".

Often, the wednesday or thursday, we go have a drink with my friends of the master (i don't how to call them, the friends that i met inside of my studies).

Also, next week is a little bit special because on friday, we celebrate the winning of the Allies during the WW1, so friday 11th of November, I won't have any class and i'll spend time with my mum.

During the week-end, i generally do nothing special but really enjoy seeing my mum and spending time with her.

That's what i'll do next week, thanks everyone for reading my text ;)

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Nov. 6, 2022

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Normally, a week kind of looks like that is:

This not that.
The phrase seems very informal but maybe that is the style you are using. You may like to use 'A typical week would look like this:' This is still informal but would be more common written language.

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Nov. 6, 2022

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a normal week


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Hi !


Hi ! Hi!

Hi ! Hi!

My name is Isa, i'm a law student.


My name is Isa, iI'm a law student. My name is Isa, I'm a law student.

I'm currently studying in a my second year of master degree in the university of Strasbourg, France.


I'm currently studying in a my second year of a master degree in the uUniversity of Strasbourg, France. I'm currently studying in my second year of a master degree in the University of Strasbourg, France.

University is capitalized because it is part of the name of a specific university

I'm currently studying in a my second year of master degree iny program at the uUniversity of Strasbourg, France. I'm currently studying in a my second year of my program at the University of Strasbourg, France.

Normally, a week kind of looks like that :


Normally, a week kind of looks like that is: Normally, a week kind of looks like this:

This not that. The phrase seems very informal but maybe that is the style you are using. You may like to use 'A typical week would look like this:' This is still informal but would be more common written language.

Normally, a week kind of looks like that : Normally, a week kind of looks like that:

I like to wake up early in the morning, maybe around 6 or 7 o'clock.


Then i take a coffee, and take a great time for myself, enjoying to learn either italian, german or russian on my computer.


Then iI take a coffee, and take a great time for myself, enjoying to learning either iItalian, gGerman or rRussian on my computer. Then I take a coffee, and take a great time for myself, enjoying learning either Italian, German or Russian on my computer.

Capitalization of Languages. I won't correct capitalization of 'I' from here as I am sure you are aware that 'I' should be capital. 'Take a coffee' is correct but very uncommon - have or drink a coffee would be more common. Enjoying learning seems better that enjoying to learn but I am sorry I cannot explain why.

Then iI take a coffee, and take a greatsome time for myself,. I enjoying to learn either i learning Italian, gGerman or rRussian on my computer. Then I take a coffee, and take some time for myself. I enjoy learning Italian, German or Russian on my computer.

After that, i eat my breakfast and then i go to the gym for 1h30 or something like that.


After that, iI eat my breakfast and then Ii go to the gym for 1h30 or something like that. After that, I eat my breakfast and thenIi go to the gym for 1h30 or something like that.

I feel so good after having done my exercise !


I feel so good after having done my exercise ! I feel so good after my exercise!

Then, i come back home, take a shower and begin to study... That's not the best moment of the day but it's something I have to do !


Then, i comeI go back home, take a shower and begin to study... That's not the best moment of the day but it's something I have to do ! Then, I go back home, take a shower and begin to study... That's not the best moment of the day but it's something I have to do!

I also go to the university...


I don't have a lot of classes during the week, so i am there maybe 2 or 3 hours per day.


I don't have a lot of classes during the week, so iI am there maybe 2 or 3 hours per day. I don't have a lot of classes during the week, so I am there maybe 2 or 3 hours per day.

The tuesday, i go to my cubain salsa class and i really like that !


The tOn Tuesday, i go to my cCubain salsa class and i really like that ! On Tuesday, i go to my Cuban salsa class and i really like that!

TheOn tuesday, iI go to my cubain salsa class and ithat I really like that !. On tuesday, I go to my cubain salsa class that I really like that.

That's so much fun !!


ThaIt's so much fun !! It's so much fun!!

I also give 10 or 15 hours french classes to foreign students on a platform called "preply".


I also give 10 tor 15 hours french classes to foreign students on a platform called "preply". I also give 10 to 15 hours french classes to foreign students on a platform called "preply".

I assume this is a range and you don't give 10 'or' 15 hours of lesson

Often, the wednesday or thursday, we go have a drink with my friends of the master (i don't how to call them, the friends that i met inside of my studies).


Often, the won Wednesday or tThursday, weI go have a drink with my friends of the classmasters (i don't how to call them, the friends that i met inside of my studies). Often, on Wednesday or Thursday, I go have a drink with my classmates (i don't how to call them, the friends that i met inside of my studies).

Classmates would be the best single word. You could add classmates from university or classmates from my master's course to be more specific. 'I go' not 'we go' in this context. You could say 'I meet my classmates and we go...' English doesn't use the article 'the' for days of the week.

Often, the wn Wednesday or tThursday, we goften go to have a drink with my friends of the master (i don't how to call them, the friends that i met inside of my studies). On Wednesday or Thursday we often go to have a drink with my friends.

Also, next week is a little bit special because on friday, we celebrate the winning of the Allies during the WW1, so friday 11th of November, I won't have any class and i'll spend time with my mum.


Also, next week is a little bit special because on fFriday, we celebrate the winning of WW1 by the Allies during the WW1, so fon Friday, on the 11th of November, I won't have any classes and iI'll spend time with my mum. Also, next week is a bit special because on Friday, we celebrate the winning of WW1 by the Allies, so on Friday, on the 11th of November, I won't have any classes and I'll spend time with my mum.

During the week-end, i generally do nothing special but really enjoy seeing my mum and spending time with her.


During the week-end, i generally do nothing special but really enjoy seeing my mum and spending time with her. During the weekend, i generally do nothing special but really enjoy seeing my mum and spending time with her.

Weekend is one word without hyphen.

During the week-end, iI generally do nothing special, but really enjoy seeinggo and se my mum and spending time with her, which I really enjoy. During the weekend, I generally do nothing special, but go and se my mum and spending time with her, which I really enjoy.

That's what i'll do next week, thanks everyone for reading my text ;)


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