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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 30, 2021

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August 30th, 2021

Today, my son took the entrance examination of the Kyoto University graduate school for his first choice.
By the way, I read an interesting article online. It's about the crosswalk. It looks like floating.
Here is the article: https://www.sankei.com/article/20210830-INK6DYM2WJKWFME4FTZ6DYS2K4/


今日、息子は第一志望である京都大学大学院の入学試験を受けました。
ところで、ネットで面白い記事を読みました。それは、横断歩道についてです。浮き上がっているように見えます。
こちらがその記事です。https://www.sankei.com/article/20210830-INK6DYM2WJKWFME4FTZ6DYS2K4/

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August 30th, 2021

Today, my son took the entrance examination of the Kyoto University graduate school for, which is his first choice.

This is a little wordy, I would *personally* say something like:

Today, my son took an entrance examination for a university in Kyoto.

By the way, I read an interesting article online.

It's about the crosswalk.

It looks like it's floating.

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I hope your son did well and I wish him all the best.

The floating crosswalk looks cool too!

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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 30, 2021

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Thank you!

August 30th, 2021


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Today, my son took the entrance examination of the Kyoto University graduate school for his first choice.


Today, my son took the entrance examination of the Kyoto University graduate school for, which is his first choice.

This is a little wordy, I would *personally* say something like: Today, my son took an entrance examination for a university in Kyoto.

By the way, I read an interesting article online.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's about the crosswalk.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It looks like floating.


It looks like it's floating.

Here is the article: https://www.sankei.com/article/20210830-INK6DYM2WJKWFME4FTZ6DYS2K4/


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