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August 23th, 2025

Today, I went to Lynn Canyon.
It was so beautiful.
River was so clear, and too cold.
And, new home stay student come my house.
Her name is Rika. She is good.

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August 23th, 2025 Entry

Today, I went to Lynn Canyon. in Canada

NOTE: Many people might not know that Lynn Canyon in Canada.

It was so beautiful.

River was so clear, and tooIf there is *only one* river: The river there was so clear, and its waters were cold.¶
If there is *more than one* river: The rivers there were so clear, and its waters were
cold.

And, a new home stay student come my house.

Her name is Rika.

August 23th, 2025

Today, I went to Lynn Canyon.

It was so beautiful.

RThe river was so clear, and toso cold.

You've been speaking positively about the river (beautiful, clear), but "too cold" is a negative. You could either say "so cold" as above, which is neutral, or you could say "but it was so cold," as the "but" allows our shift from positive to negative

And,lso, a new home stay student coame to my house.

Try to avoid beginning sentences with "and"

Her name is Rika.

She is goodnice.

"Good" is awkward as a standalone adjective when it's about a person; it's more used as a modifier for something else. E.g., "she is a good cook, he is a good father."

The standard general compliment would rather be "nice"

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August 23th, 2025 Entry

Today, I went to Lynn Canyon.


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Today, I went to Lynn Canyon. in Canada

NOTE: Many people might not know that Lynn Canyon in Canada.

It was so beautiful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

River was so clear, and too cold.


RThe river was so clear, and toso cold.

You've been speaking positively about the river (beautiful, clear), but "too cold" is a negative. You could either say "so cold" as above, which is neutral, or you could say "but it was so cold," as the "but" allows our shift from positive to negative

River was so clear, and tooIf there is *only one* river: The river there was so clear, and its waters were cold.¶
If there is *more than one* river: The rivers there were so clear, and its waters were
cold.

And, new home stay student come my house.


And,lso, a new home stay student coame to my house.

Try to avoid beginning sentences with "and"

And, a new home stay student come my house.

Her name is Rika.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Her name is Rika.

She is good.


She is goodnice.

"Good" is awkward as a standalone adjective when it's about a person; it's more used as a modifier for something else. E.g., "she is a good cook, he is a good father." The standard general compliment would rather be "nice"

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