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Aug. 19, 2025

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August 18th, 2025

Today, I went to Deer Lake.
I did canoe with a child.
She was Korean.
And, I learned Korean.
I always think, language is fun.
After, I went to Tim Hortons.
I bought Oreo cookie and lemonade.
It was so delicious.

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August 18th, 2025

Today, I went to Deer Lake.

I didwent canoeing with a child.

She was Korean.

And, I learned Korean.

I always think, that language iss are fun.

After, I went to Tim Hortons.

I bought Oreo cookie and lemonade.

It was so delicious.

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Awesome job!

Today, I went to Deer Lake and went canoeing with a child.

If you are their parent then you can say 'my child(ren)' or 'my kid(s)'

I did canoe with a child.

You can combine these small sentences together, so try to make more complex sentences to improve your English.

She was Korean., so she taught me some of her language.

And, I learned Korean.

I've always think,ought that learning languages is fun.

Afterwards, I went to Tim Hortons.

'Afterwards' or 'After that' are suitable conjunctions here.

I bought Oreo cookies and lemonade.

Do they taste well together? Did you dunk your oreos in lemonade?

It was so delicious.

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Keep up the good work!

August 18th, 2025


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I went to Deer Lake.


Today, I went to Deer Lake and went canoeing with a child.

If you are their parent then you can say 'my child(ren)' or 'my kid(s)'

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I did canoe with a child.


I did canoe with a child.

You can combine these small sentences together, so try to make more complex sentences to improve your English.

I didwent canoeing with a child.

She was Korean.


She was Korean., so she taught me some of her language.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And, I learned Korean.


And, I learned Korean.

And, I learned Korean.

It was so delicious.


It was so delicious.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I always think, language is fun.


I've always think,ought that learning languages is fun.

I always think, that language iss are fun.

After, I went to Tim Hortons.


Afterwards, I went to Tim Hortons.

'Afterwards' or 'After that' are suitable conjunctions here.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I bought Oreo cookie and lemonade.


I bought Oreo cookies and lemonade.

Do they taste well together? Did you dunk your oreos in lemonade?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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