I learned about Indigenous people in Canada.

And, I made traditional knitting. for the second time.

Actually, my second time, but I made wellI made it well this time.

I learned about Indigenous people in Canada.

And, I madepracticed traditional knitting.

The word "made" here reads as you litterally invented traditional knitting.

I think you meant you practiced knitting traditionally.

Actually, it was my second time, but I madedid well.

In English, commas are one of those tricky things to get down.

For a rule of thumb, whenever I you use transition words (and, or, but...) at the start of a sentence, you don't add the comma. For example:

I woke up tired. And, I ate breakfast. ❌

I woke up tired. And I ate breakfast. ✅

Of course there are some exceptions. But generally you'll follow this rule. You can also practice compounding sentences! Such as, "I woke up tired, and I ate breakfast."

Good job!

I learned about Indigenous people in Canada.

And, I madI also did some traditional knitting.

Try to avoid beginning sentences with "and."

Actually, this was my second time, but I madedid it well.

I learned about Indigenous people in Canada.

Actually, it was my second time, but I madedid it well.