April 8, 2023
Schmigadoon Short song
喬什，口語]听著，Betsy，我覺得是時候就我們今晚將要發生的事情制定一些基本規則
[貝西，口語]為什麼是 Skinner 博士，是什麼讓你認為我們之間會發生什麼事？你知道嗎，我認為你對我的看法是錯誤的
[貝琪]所有的女孩調情和談浪漫
很快他們就看到了一條褲子
当太陽下山時，他們讓道德滑坡
但我要等到我成為新娘
[喬什，口語]哦，很高興聽到你這樣說，貝琪，因為，事情就是這樣——你太年輕了。
[貝琪]其他女孩喜歡展示自己的皮膚
男孩們試著看，他們想犯罪
願意做我從未嘗試過的事情
因為我要等到我成為新娘
[丹尼，梅麗莎]寶貝，你太過分了（失去理智）希望你還有那種特別的感覺（我的防禦消失了）寶貝，不要假裝，看看裡面有什麼（是的）
[丹尼和梅麗莎]現在是時候享受旅程了
JOSH, SPOKEN]
Look, Betsy, I feel like it's a good time to set some ground rules in terms of what's gonna happen between us tonight
[BETSY, SPOKEN]
Why Dr. Skinner, what makes you think anything's gonna happen between us? You know, I think you have the wrong idea about me
[BETSY]
All the girls flirt and talk romance
Soon as they see a pair of pants
When the sun goes down they let their morals slide
But I'm gonna wait 'til I'm a bride
[JOSH, SPOKEN]
Oh, that's great to hear, Betsy, because, here's the thing -- you are way too young.
[BETSY]
Other girls like to show their skin
Boys try and look and they want to sin
Willing to do things that I have never triеd
'Cause I'm gonna wait 'til I'm a bride
[DANNY, MELISSA]
Baby, you're much too much (Losing my senses)
Hoping you've still got that special touch (There go my defenses)
Baby, don't pretend, find out what's inside (Yes)
[DANNY & MELISSA]
Now it's time to enjoy the ride
Correction Settings
[喬什，口語]] “听著，Betsy”，我覺得是時候就我們今晚將要發生的事情制定一些基本規則
。
[貝西，口語]為什麼是 Skinner 博士，是什麼讓你認為我們之間會發生什麼事？你知道嗎，我認為你對我的看法是錯誤的
。
#NOTICE
[貝琪] 所有的女孩調情和談浪漫
（ I didn't get it, sorry? The function of this phrase??It's about her words, right?)
( I didn't get it, sorry, but in this part, you mean" A background (describing the environment but without the main character, right I guess??)
很快他們就看到了一條褲子
当太陽下山時，他們讓道德滑坡
但我要等到我成為新娘
[喬什，口語]
[喬什]"哦，很高興聽到你這樣說"，貝琪，因為，事情就是這樣——你太年輕了。
[貝琪]“其他女孩喜歡展示自己的皮膚
”，
“男孩們想試著看，因为他們想犯罪
他们願意做我從未嘗試過的事情
因為我要等到我成為新娘
#NOTICE :因為我要等到我成為新娘” ( ？？？？I didn't understand. She's a girl. But Why did she say I have to wait until my bride? 🤔😂??# I couldn't find the logic??
[丹尼，梅麗莎]寶貝，你太過分了（失去理智）"希望你還有那種特別的感覺（我的防禦消失了）寶貝，不要假裝，看看裡面有什麼（是的）
????I didn't get it?? What happened haha lol
[丹尼和梅麗莎]"現在是時候享受旅程了."
[喬什] “听著，Betsy”，我覺得是時候就我們今晚將要發生的事情制定一些基本規則。
[貝西]為什麼是 Skinner 博士，是什麼讓你認為我們之間會發生什麼？你知道嗎，我認為你對我的看法是錯誤的。
#NOTICE
[貝琪] 所有的女孩調情和談浪漫 （ I didn't get it, sorry? The function of this phrase??It's about her words, right?)
( I didn't get it, sorry, but in this part, you mean" A background (describing the environment but without the main character, right I guess??)
很快他們就看到了一條褲子
当太陽下山時，他們讓道德滑坡
但我要等到我成為新娘
[喬什]"哦，很高興聽到你這樣說"，貝琪，因為，事情就是這樣——你太年輕了。
[貝琪]“其他女孩喜歡展示自己的皮膚”，
“男孩們想試著看，因为他們想犯罪
他们願意做我從未嘗試過的事情
#NOTICE :因為我要等到我成為新娘” ( ？？？？I didn't understand. She's a girl. But Why did she say I have to wait until my bride? 🤔😂??# I couldn't find the logic??
[丹尼，梅麗莎]寶貝，你太過分了（失去理智）"希望你還有那種特別的感覺（我的防禦消失了）寶貝，不要假裝，看看裡面有什麼（是的）
????I didn't get it?? What happened haha lol
[丹尼和梅麗莎]"現在是時候享受旅程了."
It's a dialogue but missing many things you must be aware of！！！. First, there's no punctuation (It's a very serious problem), and second, I feel there's no logic, you know, for some sentences. I don't know what happened, haha. You can pay attention to the places I marked with #NOTICE. But generally, I got it. Just pay more attention to some places.
Feedback
As I wrote before. 加油！
Hey
I found something that might work for you: Catch it, Bro:: You can try to write in this way cause. Generally, we use this "classic model."
Ex. ( English version and translated version. You can see how that works exactly)这是一个例子，你可以看看怎么使用这个模型开始描写一个对话
A: What’s the time
B: It’s almost noon.
A: 現在幾點?
B: 已經快中午了。
A: What are you doing now?
B: I’m watching TV.
A: Me, too.
A:你現在做什麼?
B:我正在看電視。
A:我也是。
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Schmigadoon Short song |
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喬什，口語]听著，Betsy，我覺得是時候就我們今晚將要發生的事情制定一些基本規則 [貝西，口語]為什麼是 Skinner 博士，是什麼讓你認為我們之間會發生什麼事？你知道嗎，我認為你對我的看法是錯誤的 [貝琪]所有的女孩調情和談浪漫 很快他們就看到了一條褲子 当太陽下山時，他們讓道德滑坡 但我要等到我成為新娘 [喬什，口語]哦，很高興聽到你這樣說，貝琪，因為，事情就是這樣——你太年輕了。 [貝琪]其他女孩喜歡展示自己的皮膚 男孩們試著看，他們想犯罪 願意做我從未嘗試過的事情 因為我要等到我成為新娘 [丹尼，梅麗莎]寶貝，你太過分了（失去理智）希望你還有那種特別的感覺（我的防禦消失了）寶貝，不要假裝，看看裡面有什麼（是的） [丹尼和梅麗莎]現在是時候享受旅程了
[喬什 It's a dialogue but missing many things you must be aware of！！！. First, there's no punctuation (It's a very serious problem), and second, I feel there's no logic, you know, for some sentences. I don't know what happened, haha. You can pay attention to the places I marked with #NOTICE. But generally, I got it. Just pay more attention to some places. |
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